Naruto Shadow Mage

It is worth saying that this story is very exciting, but it darkens all human nature. This looks very uncomfortable. Think about it, the third generation of Hokage in this story is actually darker than Danzo. In this story, I feel it is completely the opposite. The third generation of Hokage like Danzo is sitting on the Hokage. After such a comparison, I feel that Danzo is much better, but overall, the story is very exciting and I like it very much.

What can I say? This book gives me the feeling that the protagonist's halo is too strong. You can have a plug-in as a time traveler, but the age settings of other characters have been changed. How can you be fat? For example, if you are a five-year-old shadow level, even if you have a plug-in, can your five-year-old body handle it?

The protagonist can win almost every time, but! Yes! Nine times out of ten, the victory was a close call, and he forgot to touch up his sword every time. On several occasions, he was able to take away the Ninja Swordsmen of the Seven Ninja Swordsmen! As a result, every time I remember it at the beginning, I forget it later!!! The most important thing is forgetting to hit the last hit every time! Forgot to touch up the knife every time! Forgot to touch up the knife every time!

It's good, but it's a bit dark, and it's more biased toward real society.

Since ancient times, Nara has dispatched military divisions(ง •̀_•́)ง

You wrote "Flying Thunder God" as the teleportation technique, and there were some mistakes in the writing. The character's character is a complete mess.

It's okay to be a leader as a time traveler, and it's okay to be an all-rounder, but the creation should also be a little more reliable! A four-year-old child achieves great physical skills through his own efforts? No matter whether you are before or after time travel, the protagonist has nothing to do with physical monsters. Even if your identity in time travel is still that of the Nara clan, it has nothing to do with physical talent. The basis of taijutsu is physical fitness. In this way, a four-year-old child can train at the same level as Akai in a short time through his own efforts. How can he become a taijutsu master in a few months? Itachi became famous at what age because of his early vision and mature thinking. Except for his shuriken throwing skills and his taijutsu skills, it didn't matter at all. Did you, a child of the Nara family, have a genetic mutation or something?

Why is it that the protagonist never resurrects every time he kills someone? If you cut off his head and take him away, how can there be so many things to do after destroying his brain?

Was this written by Wang Dongcheng?

It feels awkward to write the plot of Naruto using the routines and techniques of fantasy novels, and to write the foreshadowing using the word-counting technique of a flowing writer. Fortunately, the plot is good, but the setting is uncomfortable. What does it mean to be accurate in half a step? Since this is a fan fiction, please respect the original plot setting. Elite Jonin is a title, not a standard for dividing strength. Especially in this work, what about the presence of Jonin? There are too many shortcomings, so I won't go into them.