The Outcast: A Frog from the Start Sends Me the Claw of Severance

You can still watch the scene in the front, but the system disappears directly in the back. It feels like it was written by AI.

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Half of the writing was done while sitting and I stood up. The editor lamented that it was a pity that Ma Zikun had started the heirloom. He sat on the autopilot for a few laps and then completed the other half. He failed to finish it and put it to dust early due to insufficient nuclear water and fuel.

It was okay in the past, but after three hundred and seventy, like Shi Lezhi, what kind of thing did he write? The plot before and after doesn't match up either.

The front is really good, but the further you go to the back, the more watery it becomes, making it difficult to evaluate.

It's a bit boring, the characterization is very poor, I was bullied to the door by Qu Tong, I only know how to kill, kill, kill, please report the news, who is controlled by Qu Tong, there are Qu Tong's people in the company, if you tell me these things, dog bites dog, but not

The protagonist is extremely double-standard and is suppressed by the enemy's IQ. The most important point is that after chapter 370, it was spliced ​​together from some random articles.

In fact, the first part is really okay. An unfinished fanfic like this is a masterpiece after more than 200 chapters. Comments say that the second part is not good, but it is too long and the writing is broken. Moreover, it is not recommended to have a female supporting character who can't grasp the relationship. Bai Shixue is too incomprehensible.

White snow has no sense of boundaries If you don't know how to write, the heroine advises you not to write.

What's written in the back of Forced Intelligence? It's a mess. Chapter 300 and on will be very messy.