Ultraman: My First Transformation Gave Me Away

If you accept a heroine, then accept the heroine. You have to accept Mayumi who has a boyfriend. Before, she protected her boyfriend in order to let her marry her boyfriend. After Mayumi got married, her husband died, so the protagonist stepped in and accepted Mayumi. Isn't it disgusting. When Mayumi does it with the protagonist, it feels more like doing it with her ex-boyfriend, which makes her feel sick and disgusted.

The content is okay, but Mayumi might as well not accept it. If you want to accept it, don't write the same plot as the original one. It's really very speechless. The plot development is really redundant.

No matter if you ask Takumo to die early or not to die, you will not be evaluated like this. You just chose the way of writing that has the most comments. It is recommended not to include your own disgusting xp in the book. 😅

How can I put it, the scale is still a bit big, I don't have a problem with splitting the official version, but it is a bit split, which makes me feel sick and makes my eyes dark.

You might as well not accept Mayumi. If you want to accept her, you might as well accept her from the beginning. After her boyfriend dies, you are going to accept you. Isn't this just eating too much? Do you feel that it feels disgusting when you write like this🤢

??? Isn't Mayumi my sister? Why did everyone say they would accept it???

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