Building Infrastructure in Another World

It's good to read, but the ending is too hasty. The pace of the first half of the book is okay, but it suddenly takes off at the end, and the progress is rapid. There is obviously a lot of content that can be written, but it is summarized in a few sentences.

A time-travel infrastructure novel just puts the background in a magical, similar to Western cultural background. The reason why I couldn't finish reading it halfway through is that, except for the heroine, they are basically negative characters. The government is not good, the church is bad, the nobles have no good people, the relatives are not good, and the slaves are waiting for her to be redeemed... The role of the heroine is not achieved by simply denying the whole world. This tone lasts until chapter 150, so I can't stand it anymore...

The subject matter is good, the plot is reasonable, and the sentences are fluent. It can be seen that Da Da is a bit imaginative, but the characters are a bit thin, and the article is like mountains but not flat. The story frame can write about Kunlun, but the writing is only about hills. It can be read by an old bookworm like me. It is very good and the future is promising.

It's good-looking, and the subject matter is novel, but I don't know what's wrong with it. Is it a rushed ending? Or is the heroine too idealistic? Anyway, it looks okay! You can get into the trap when you are short of books!

It's quite good-looking, and the heroine is sober and motivated throughout the whole process~

The story structure is good, but the writing is very bland, and there are no major emotional ups and downs in the narrative process.