Success Was Abandoned, Do You Regret That I Established the Supreme Immortal Sect?

Reading this book has always been a pleasure. After reading Chapter 148, I felt unhappy because now I can't wait to see more of it! Warning to fellow readers, if you want to have a great time, just enter. There is no trace of "torture" or "death" in order to develop the "plot". This is how it should be with the system. The logic is clear, the IQ is online, and the killing is decisive... All reflected. Also, if you come in to see it, you don't need to store your brain.

It's okay. Chapters 6 and 7 are a bit awkward to read, but it's okay. The more I write in the future, the better.

It's good-looking. It gets better and better the further you go. The author didn't write it down.

Author, your writing is really great. I want to give you crazy reminders, votes, good reviews, and rewards...

9.6? How do you rate it?

The plot design is good, but the writing still needs more work. The character descriptions are not rich enough, and the language expression is not smooth enough. Some of them are too deliberate. It would be better if it could be written in a more normal way and use some ordinary conversational tone expressions.

Nice