Xuanhuan: I Can Synthesize Anything from the Discarded Pill Room

Good!

Although the plot is classic, the author's writing style is good, and the plot is very imaginative and beautiful.

The writing is quite interesting, I'm looking forward to the plot in the future.

The first dozen or so chapters were not very good, mainly because compared with other immortality novels, the hierarchical system of skills was very different (so it seemed a bit messy), so the author took the trouble to repeat the explanation. But after more than 200 chapters, the plot structure was established, and the writing was obviously much better. There were some marginalia and the old white writing style. The fairy world constructed in this article is quite unique. There are no good people (the degree of badness is different), and they are all hurting each other. It is rare to be able to depict it so vividly.

The subject matter is okay, and the general plot is also okay, but I feel that the characters are a bit average, that is, Bing'er and Lan Yue'er, both of them feel like they have been hit by a magic pill. The main reason is that it feels a bit stiff. Yan Huo also has the attributes of the fusion elixir, his kung fu boxing, and the sword formation minor and dacheng. These are not very clear. Maybe because they have to be fused later, I feel that the effect is not very effective, or that the service enhancement for the protagonist is not that strong. I feel that there should still be foreshadowing in the follow-up of Yin Yang Furnace, maybe something like Tianni Pearl, because he did not choose to use the system to explain it.

To put it simply, it is average, very average. The sentences do not make sense, the logic is inconsistent, the statements are inconsistent, and the language is unclear. And the biggest problem with this book is that it is so verbose and unclear. Boring, boring. That's it, abandon the pit!

The protagonist is so useless

The plot of the story is advancing too slowly. I have almost finished reading the book. The protagonist has not yet broken through the foundation building stage. The foundation building stage has been completed. I don't know when to wait.

The plot is exciting and very good

It's a bit frustrating. Eight of the ten chapters are nonsense. I won't go into details. Just look at a few of them. I looked at dozens of them and it was like asking who the hero is and what he is doing. If you want to make an elixir, you have to go through ninety-nine and eighty-one difficulties. It's really frustrating.