A Good-for-Nothing Exchange Student? No, the Genius Junior Sister!

The supporting characters are extremely witty The vicious female supporting role is inexplicably hostile to the heroine, and the handyman is not an outer disciple. It should be extremely easy for the sect master to convict him, but he has not been offline until now. The second female lead is also stupid. She wholeheartedly believes in evil people, which often puts her in danger. She does things without thinking. Even the person who almost killed her needs to be saved. The protagonist also has problems. He obviously has a backer and can easily deal with them, but he has to deal with them himself. Some of his choices are very baffling. In order to highlight the heroine's character, he failed again.

The author is probably new to this book, so it feels a bit short. But I was amazed at the beginning. There are many fragments in it that can arouse the mood of people who have read too many novels, ≽^•༚• ྀི≼ and the author describes vivid images, which well highlights the characteristics of the protagonist. When the protagonist was accused by thousands of people (here specifically referring to stealing the jade pendant and causing his father to vomit blood), I felt pain in my heart. O(╥╥)o The other supporting characters are also very well written. I like the Master the most~ the beauty in red dress directly touches my heart‎ദ്ദിᵔ.˛.ᵔ₎✧ I hope the author will be more explosive~₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

The plot is good, but there are some passages that smell of love. They are obviously written in love. If you can't write the text, just don't write it. Why use love? I am disgusted with this kind of behavior. I don't know what the author is thinking.

I feel so speechless. Why do I have to bring a cowardly Madonna to drag the oil bottle? And why does this heroine like to help others so much? The female supporting characters are all like stupid people. In fact, the heroine is deliberately written to be smart. In fact, the writing is so blunt and inexplicable, which makes her look even more stupid.

It smells like AI and the plot doesn't match up. It's obvious that the foundation was built in the front, but it's about refining the Qi in the back. It's totally wrong. Although it's a new article and I've written more than 200 chapters, I guess there are usually drafts. I've already written more than 200. Haven't you discovered this little mistake yet? It's hard to comment.

It's a bit intellectually subdued, and it also feels like Luo Qianshan doesn't have the spirit of immortality. The writing is a bit pretentious... And they are all cultivating immortals. If they have the strength, they can be killed. Why keep them for intrigues?

Are there people who are so stupid even if they can become immortals? If you are stupid to a certain extent, you are bad. Not to mention that there are many geniuses. Are such stupid friends to highlight the kindness of the heroine? It's like a palace fight

I have read dozens of chapters so far, and I feel so suffocated. The heroine was wronged and seemed to have no mouth. Also at the beginning, the heroine obviously passed the mental training and broke the record, but she couldn't enter the inner door, so she must at least be the outer door. But in the end, her master directly said that she would go to work as a handyman, which I thought was quite unfavorable, although later on the heroine's master was also kind to the heroine.

OK

The beginning was pretty good. Anyway, I was attracted by watching the short video. Then the more I watched it, the more uncomfortable it became. I felt like I was suddenly enlightened. The control group was really inexplicable! There are false accusations and false accusations, a lot of nonsense, the vicious female protagonist just says a few words, and everyone believes it, everyone blames the heroine, and the heroine has to go to all the trouble to prove herself, laugh to death, who is the heroine? In short, it's been so long since you've written the clichéd plots and subdued your wits, aren't you still tired of writing them? It's so boring, can't we come up with something new?