I Grow Trees with My Pocket Dimension and Contract Nine High-Ranking Sentinels

I feel like the plot is actually pretty good. But I feel there are some problems with some of the author's writing habits. For example, he didn't mark many dialogues like this. Who said this? Then it makes people very tired when watching it, and they have to use the context to guess who said this sentence.

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First, when the heroine was scolded by Commander Song Yu for not giving guidance to Li Xiao, she behaved like a weakling. She did not resist or explain, and then she was easily coaxed and forgiven without retaliation. It really makes people feel angry watching it! Secondly, the heroine was deliberately murdered. The evidence is conclusive, but the criminal can still run around and continue all kinds of provocations, but he was not released from prison in time? For the water plot? The logic of the writing is really poor and I can't stand it.

I just want to say Urge more, Urge more, Urge more, Urge more, Urge more

It's so beautiful. I just want to stop everyone who is close to the heroine from becoming partners. Family ties are good too.

I like the story very much. The names of every character in it are very special to me. I especially like the first part about life in the East District. I read that part three or four times, but the part about the young marshal that follows is not my cup of tea. The plot is not protracted, nor does it forcefully set up suspense. The ending is a bit sudden, and I hope there will be more extras. The most commendable thing is that Dada basically guarantees two updates a day, and occasionally adds updates. If it cannot be updated, it will explain the situation in time. Compared with those who make big posts or disappear for a few days inexplicably, Dada's way of writing and doing things is too suitable for me. Looking forward to the next article!

It looks good, but there are too few. I couldn't help but look at it after a few days, ah ah ah

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Overall it's pretty good to watch, but I feel like the author isn't very good at depicting fights, nor is he very good at the power struggle part, so it's a bit boring to watch. I think the best part is when the heroine and the hero get along, they are warm, natural, and sweet, and I can't get enough of them. To be honest, it's strange, because I stopped reading novels where the heroine and the hero were together, because I always felt that the authors were not good at writing, and they wrote it hard, which was boring and boring. One thing is that there are too many male protagonists, and I feel that the author can't write them all. In some parts, some male protagonists are simply missing. Until the end, Jiuying and Song's TieTie part was not made up, which was a lot less than others. Not to mention other things, Meng Ji, Yuan, Zuo Yuan and Young Marshal didn't mention forming a contract with the heroine in the ending, so I won't treat them as a harem. Young Marshal and Meng Ji are too twisted. As long as they play straight and are gentle and say that they really like the heroine and please give them a name, the heroine will not impulsively say that only nine are needed when talking to Gu Lin. The looseness was a little better, at least it exploded later, although that part was still twisted and made me a little angry, but at least I was willing to lower my profile and say that I was willing to be the heroine's lover. The young marshal is the one who makes me feel speechless the most. He likes not to express himself, and just gets sulky and leaves the heroine to guess 666. Although I was speechless about Meng Ji, at least I realized that teasing the heroine all the time would only drive her further and further away. At least he was gentle towards the end of his scene, which made the heroine shake. However, the author did not write Meng Ji's scenes anymore. I feel that the author was tired of writing, and the story was almost finished. However, I don't have too many regrets, because I don't like Meng Ji very much, so I don't care if there is any scene with him later. The reason why I don't like it is similar to that of Young Marshal. The same routines are used before. He talks in a roundabout way and does things in a roundabout way. He likes to let the heroine guess and confess his character. I can only say that the disadvantage is too obvious. He still smokes. The whole scene of quitting smoking is just for the heroine. He feeds the heroine second-hand smoke. I hate smokers. I don't think it's sweet when I look at it. I just find it funny. There are also many people who do this in real life. The man quits smoking in order to be with the woman. When they broke up, he yelled that I have given so much for you and I quit smoking for you... I am a little wary after seeing similar incidents of "I am for you xxx"

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