Fantasy Beginning: Marrying the Queen's Wife

It was great at the beginning, but not so good in the middle.

The front is okay, but the writing in the middle is a mess.

I have vomited and lived for more than ten years, and I have never read such a bad book. If you sprinkle some dog food on the keyboard, the dog's writing is better than yours.

It feels really bad 🤢

The setting of the realm is a mess. At the beginning, it is set that people from other worlds will not be included in the list. Later, the main character will be directly included. The character description is so messed up that I have to write an article about it. One moment, the person who is in the Heaven-defying realm is so powerful that he can do whatever he says, and the next moment, even several masters who are not in the Heaven-defying realm have to come and go. And the opponents are all fools, right? They've lived for thousands of years, and yet they take the initiative to fight the protagonist even though they're not even close to their own level? It's worse than a child in kindergarten for thousands of years.

It was okay at the beginning, but were you writing a running account in the middle?

What the hell is this written? It's a mess, the plot is confusing, there are so many typos, I can't stand it anymore.

There are typos everywhere, making it even harder to understand.

I can't understand or listen well, every sentence is full of typos, and the chapters are all messed up.

Unfinished