Forbidden Land Adventure: Beginning Playing as Luffy's Teammate Zhang Qilin

I hope there is no female protagonist. Then let the male protagonist be with Zhang Qilin, this is my wish.

I really like the "Den in the Rain" CP! ! ! Lock me up.

I think it's okay. The challenges in the forbidden area are quite interesting, but in the end, it's basically about catching Zhang Qilin, and then Fang Yu solves the problem. In addition, Fang Yu's constant acting seems a bit boring. The actor's character traits, hobbies, etc. Are written well, but it feels like there is a little bit of novelty.

Wide to

It's very humorous, and I laughed almost the whole time. And I personally don't like having a female protagonist. Other novels about female protagonists just feel a bit uncomfortable, especially the kind that pulls the protagonist's back and doesn't have the ability to stay shamelessly around the protagonist. The biggest reason is that I like the character of Little Brother very much. Come on, author, I will keep following up!

The writing was very good at the beginning, but it gradually fell apart at the end. It was quite funny. The ending was too rushed. I felt like it was not finished. I should continue writing. I hope there will be a sequel.

The plot is excellent. Fang Yu and Zhang Qilin made me so excited that I lay in bed laughing like a maggot in the middle of the night.

Don't rub mud

Not enough ( •̀△•́ )

Hope there will be a sequel