After Our Marriage by Proxy, the Ailing Young Lord Is So Furious He’s Bouncing with Energy

This ancient poem is quite interesting. The opening chapter is eloquent and has the feeling of a storyteller, which is very interesting. The choice of words and sentences is antique, the author has a profound writing skills, it looks pleasing to the eye, I like it very much. The heroine Su Tang was forced to get married after traveling through time. On her wedding night, she rescued the hero who was poisoned by a strange poison. The interaction between the two is also very interesting. The female protagonist is self-reliant, smart and courageous. I love her character like this. The male protagonist is also very cute when he pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger.

After reading it for several days, I finally came to review it! First of all, I personally think it is well written. Putting aside the occasional typos and bad sentences, the plot of this book is wonderful, at least it is pretty good among online articles. Sorted it out: 1. The male and female protagonists have very likable personalities and interact a lot. They are together almost all the time, and their feelings are gradually accumulated. Every step is clear, and the speed is just right to be comfortable. It is neither done overnight nor too delayed. Shuangjie, the relationship between the male and female protagonists is also very comfortable! It makes people want to watch it slowly. This kind of warm, interesting and high-frequency interaction is so comfortable~ It also fits the label of "happy enemies" in this article🏷️haha 2. The villain is both smart and bad. Although the aura of the male and female protagonists are obvious, haha, they do not appear to be weak in supporting roles; and every time the heroine responds/retaliates to others, it is very enjoyable to watch! And even when facing villains or something, the heroine is not brainless, which is in line with the true appearance of a time-traveling woman in ancient times! It's different, but not too out of the ordinary. It's really rare in the current online writing platform where there are so many mindless and exaggerated articles! 3. There are pitfalls in the early stage! For example, the case of Zhenguo Palace/King Jingnan and Princess/Emperor and Empress Shen... In fact, it can be seen that the author is filling in slowly🕳️, which makes people look forward to what will happen next~but the update has not been completed yet. Personally, I hate digging holes but not filling them. Such writing looks too tiring... So I beg the author not to let it end unfinished! 4. Also, the author probably doesn't like naming? Many supporting characters don't have clear names yet. For example, one of the hero's brothers, Prince Xin'an, and the heroine's friend, Princess Qingyang, are all called by their titles, but fortunately, this small problem does not affect the reading~ PS: I beg the author to update as soon as possible! I really like this book. I have never read serials before, hahaha, but I really like it. By the way, do you write on other platforms? I want to read it again. I really like the writing style of Dada.

Forget about the text, there are a lot of cumbersome plots in the book, repeated over and over again. This is how I don't want to make readers feel comfortable. The heroine is so smart, but why does she get hurt every time? Her cleverness is mistaken for her cleverness, and she just arranges some clever plots. She looks like Silly Bai Lian, the plot has not progressed at all.

So pretty! This article has a lot of interaction between the male and female protagonists, and it's very sweet. What I like the most is the character of the heroine Su Tang. It's so cool to watch her fight against people. Every time I see the leader of the Nankang group defeated by her, I can't help but want to laugh. Having the Fuxi Bone brings good luck wherever you go, turning the arrogant prince into a maniac who dotes on his wife step by step! The male protagonist, Xie Boting, is very aloof outside. In front of his wife, he can only be bullied. From now on, he will not be able to live up to his husband's integrity, haha... This book is worth recommending!

Book title: [The Son-in-law in Beijing F4] Author: weak water From Su Tang, who was carrying Fu Xi's bones, to marrying Xie Boting, who was crooked The house fight, palace fight, and battle have begun There is a friendly person in the book‹‹The son-in-law in Beijing F4›› F¹Xie Boting, the eldest son of Jingnan Palace ➺Su Tangᰔᩚ F²Xin'an County Wang Yunyu ➺Feng Yuanᰔᩚ F³Qi Xiao, the eldest son of the Duke of Qi ➺Lin Yunᰔᩚ F⁴Ningyang Hou Shizi Mu Zhi ➺Liu Qingerᰔᩚ There are ⁽poor⁾and ⁽refractory⁾ The eldest brother of Su Ji, the new emperor of Dongdan, Princess Qingyang There is a man who half-brings a son-in-law to your door. Xie Tian, King of Pingdu in the East, raised Princess ᰔᩚNieyang Yes One is holding a stick and the other is holding a bowl. One is responsible for crying~ and the other is responsible for shouting~ Escape together, fight together, and become bounty hunters together Bei'er and Xiaoliu, brothers from the beggar gang who have been through life and death together Unfortunately, Prince Rongli of Fufeng arrived early. There is Shen Qi, the second young master of the Duke of Zhen, who dares to attack the emperor's father Su Hongshan. There is Dugu Rou, the legitimate daughter of the Danbo Hou Mansion in Dongyong, Xu Rou Niang, who hides her identity and is an expert in martial arts. The loyal, upright, affectionate and righteous old prince Xin Emperor Fuxigu and Prince An are brothers in distress who attract bees and butterflies 😂 There are Prince Kang, Qin Huang, Qin Wen, Poria, Pinellia pinellia, Red caltrop and egret, Almighty light and dark guard, horseman, thug messenger, Chen Qing😏 Also, the daughter of King Jingnan is married to the crown prince of Song Dynasty, the second young lady of the Prince of Jingnan is pregnant with the son of Prince Song, the second young master of the Prince of Jingnan has deposed the crown prince of Song, and the sister of the crown prince of Song is pregnant with the child of the second young master of the Prince of Jingnan... Come and come to predict what will happen next and see for yourself 😂😂😂 I forgot to comment on this book from beginning to end😄 Must make up, highly recommended ~

This is the most exciting time travel story I have ever read. The author's writing style is humorous, and the plot is full of ups and downs without being the same as other similar time-travel novels. The heroine is smart and lucky, and she has the Fuxi bone. She is able to turn danger into danger and get benefits in disguise. It's hard to accept it. The male protagonist is sinister and dotes on the heroine. The love scenes between the two are sweet and not abusive. As the saying goes, love requires abuse. If you don't abuse, you won't be affectionate. The author arranged for the male protagonist's parents, the prince and the princess, to abuse him. He also arranged for the male protagonist to cheat on his father. This not only captures the reader's heart but also avoids spoiling the reader's mood. It is really called a deep understanding of the reader's psychology, and it is also very sinister. Although the author is still writing hard and the whole drama has not ended yet, given that the article is very unique, I still highly recommend it. I hope the author doesn't fail the book.

There are thieves in the first grade, thieves in the second grade, beauties in the third grade dance ballet, and handsome guys in the fourth grade are not pursued. Love letters are flying all over the place in the fifth grade, there are a lot of homework in the sixth grade, the test papers in the seventh grade are laid out on the carpet, the couples in the eighth grade are in pairs, and the tuition in the ninth grade is really expensive.

I was very surprised when I first read this book. The author's literary talent is very good, and the story structure is also very good. The male and female protagonists win in all kinds of battles and battles. The positive characters in it are also very clear. However, the identities of some characters are not clearly explained. There are many characters and it is confusing. No matter how important the characters are, it can be ignored. The most important thing is the emotional development of the male and female protagonists. The female protagonist. The protagonist clearly likes the male protagonist, and the male protagonist also made it clear from the beginning that he did not like the second lady, but the female protagonist is acting like crazy. She has been seeing no development in the relationship between men and women for a hundred chapters. Finally, after enduring it until chapter 140, there is still no progress. Instead, the female protagonist is even more aggressive. I don't like the heroine's character. She doesn't have the courage of modern people to love or hate, so she abandoned the book. It's not easy for an author to write a book, but he was so angry at being written by the heroine that he could only give it an average rating!

The little things in Luo Li Ba Suo are clearly written, and the climax is easily taken care of. The heroine is shouting and leaving while making love to the hero. The relationship between the hero and the heroine is also strange, and the woman pretending to be a man is also very perfunctory. How did it get such a high score? Seven The Seven Cats novel is becoming more and more unreliable now

To be honest, the more I read this book, the more I get annoyed. Both the male and female protagonists are too weak, especially the female protagonist. Every time she is bullied, she says she will fight back, but after talking for a long time, she does nothing, and the next time she is bullied, she is still victimized. The book always writes that the heroine's eyes flashed with cold light. Don't tell me that the heroine's eyes are frozen. It's cold all day long. People bully her even if she doesn't do anything. Finally, in the middle of the plot, it was quite satisfying to watch the heroine punish the evildoers. Later, in the chapters of going to the military camp, in order to highlight the halo of the heroine, the IQs of the generals in the military camp were not lowered. No one could have thought of anything, but the heroine thought of it alone. Moreover, every time, it was written that the heroine was suspicious and did not ask someone to check, so she comforted herself in her heart and hoped that she was overthinking. In the end, when something happened, it was really unexpected. Moreover, he thinks too highly of himself and makes fun of the system. The male protagonist is also irritating. He is jealous every day and gets jealous at every turn. Moreover, the male and female protagonists do not differentiate between occasions. They are charming in the same room every day. The same is true in the military camp. The female protagonist is given special treatment in the military camp. The female protagonist is too pampered. The male protagonist is very talkative about their relationship at the beginning, which leads to a lot of misunderstandings. The writing is so unreasonable. They say that the national treasury is empty every day, but they reward the heroine with box after box of gold every day. Many people say that this is the emperor's private treasury. What's wrong with the private treasury? Can't it fill the national treasury? Still owe military pay. I can't stand it anymore. Summary: the heroine's halo is too great; The male and female protagonists are too weak; In order to set off the male and female protagonists, the IQs of other people were pulled too low; The things written are too fake and inconsistent with common sense; The heroine is too much a virgin; The writing is too cumbersome and the organization is not clear enough. I just didn't like it very much, so I read it patiently and if there are people who like it, don't criticize it. What I'm telling you is the truth.