On the Night I Died Giving Birth, the Reborn Legitimate Daughter Slaughtered the Entire Marquis's Household

May I ask the author: In ancient times, if a sword was pierced through the heart, one could walk and talk the next day.

The plot is very exciting and can keep people watching. However, there are too many typos, which are serious enough to affect the viewing. Some of them are obviously not fluent; some plots are not logical and inconsistent. The author may forget what he said before while writing. The last name is often confused. Such logical errors and typos are very annoying. What's even more annoying is that the male protagonist is very poor. Not only compared to other female male protagonists, but compared to ordinary men, he is very poor. I don't understand why such a disgusting person can be the male protagonist. Apart from being extremely powerful, he has nothing at all.

The biggest obstacle to reading this article is that there are too many typos and too many mismatches; What is incomprehensible is that the heroine is the only one in charge of the general's palace. The two maids are innocent and have no force value, and they have no guards when they go out. After rebirth, she tightly covers up the misfortune of her previous life, and does not reveal anything to the father of the general, who has a strong force value and intelligence and loves her life, just to break up. The heroine comes out; in the prison of the Ministry of Punishment, the heroine is strangled by the neck. I really don't understand the confidence of the male partner to commit suicide. A lonely heir apparent in the palace wants to kill the only daughter of a popular general in full view of the public (the heroine went to the prison to find someone who was followed). Where is her IQ? The image of the male protagonist is too bad. I don't understand that in current Internet articles, they always like to write about male protagonists who are always choking people's necks, especially when the person he is choking has just saved his mother's life with his own life. Overall, the story is good, but there are too many flaws. I suggest the author revise the story.

May I ask? What the hell is being updated now? I can't even understand it

The male protagonist is so suspicious. He strangles someone's daughter in the general's palace just because the female protagonist is smart and knows a lot. I'm sure I can't tell you if I'm reborn. Moreover, I've already agreed to cooperate with each other. He also thinks that the female protagonist plots against him. And this kind of suspicion is enough to strangle someone to death. Why does the female protagonist still fall in love? You really can't use your brain when reading novels, haha. Overall, it's okay.

I don't know how to say that starting from -253 Back Alley, it doesn't match up with the previous plot at all. It feels like there are dozens of chapters missing in the middle. I don't know how this kind of novel can get a score of more than nine points.

What are the last few chapters about? They are not the same book at all.

It's so well written, the more I read it the better it gets! The female protagonist is not pretentious, and the male protagonist seems to be doing well now, but is starting to feel a little suspicious. Big cheers for the author

I don't know what I'm writing starting from Chapter 252. It has nothing to do with the previous content. I stayed up late and saw it now, and I feel like I've lost my temper.

The first plot is well written, but the second plot is messy and in reverse order. Isn't Yao Zi the secret guard of Yi Zichuan? How did she become a woman with superb medical skills? He even asked me, Yi Zichuan, to express his solemn thanks, but it's still unforgettable. Then why did Jiang Huaiyu go? Where is the heroine Xia Jianxi? Aren't the dark forces in the palace Yi Xinghe and the Queen Mother? Why did His Highness King Zhao suddenly appear again? I'm afraid I found someone to write it randomly. I didn't even read the plot. I made it up randomly and abandoned the book.