Shushan Signs in and Comes Out of Seclusion After Three Thousand Years, the Land Sword Immortal

Abandon your narrow vision, get out of the cycle of self-admiration, learn to appreciate others, know how to appreciate others, and you will feel that life is colorful!

I read part of the summary: (The protagonist has no emotions): It seems that his father's death has nothing to do with him. Is he the villain or the protagonist? (Repeat plot): Every time after a few years, some state will be perfected. There is only one step left to reach the next state. Then, after signing into the system, you will get some elixir to break through the state. It is repeated every time. Is it exciting? Isn't it tiring to write? The writing skills of elementary school students are not as good as those of primary school students. Come to the factory! ! !

Brother, do you only write a plot for your novel? The character description is good, but the writing style is really not good. When you break through a realm, an enemy will come to you. If you don't break through, it will be fine. You will still stay in one place. There are also enemies who don't have long memories. Two or three hundred years have passed, and everyone who comes here should know that this person exists. It's a thing. We didn't talk about him until he appeared. We suppressed him for an era. From the out-of-body stage to the Mahayana stage, did anyone admit that he was strong? Wasn't he always one level ahead? When your family came to fight, didn't you know from the beginning that he was the strongest in Shushan? Did you fight him first? Fight until the end, ah! He's so powerful that he can't be defeated, and then other people don't live for two or three hundred years, right? They don't even know how powerful he is? ? You still keep Calabash Baby saving Grandpa and delivering them one by one. Can you keep talking about delivering meals at one point? And that little tower? ? No one chooses to be the one who delivers food. There are so many people in Shushan, but you have never mentioned anyone who has a great opportunity. He is the only one who delivers food and then gets the opportunity and then becomes an immortal? You're not making the plot dull, you're just changing the name and realm of an enemy and repeating it🤮

Well written

It's super beautiful. It's the first time I've seen such a beautiful one. The others are not so beautiful. It may be my personal favorite, but I still recommend it. This one is much prettier than the Guardian God of the Human Race. First, it's my personal opinion. But the Guardian God of the Human Race is really It's very interesting. You can also check it out.\(//∇//)\But many people may not be able to accept this. If you don't have the patience, please don't read this, because you may quit after reading it for a while, and then you won't be able to read it. ^ω^ Please don't downgrade this book review.

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There are many points to complain about, just to mention a few: 1. I linger for too long. He has been hiding in the tower for hundreds of years, relying on the advantages brought by the system to show off. The plot is bland, without any imagination or exciting scenes and plot descriptions. There is no planning or active exploration, and there is no even challenge at all. Boring! 2. The male protagonist looks cool but is actually ruthless. Whether it was for his father, younger brother, or for the little fox and junior sister, he only took action a few times in desperate situations and never had any active concern. How many martial arts, combat skills, elixirs, and magic weapons should there be after hundreds of years of signing? He sent out a flying sword and received back a better flying sword. He crushed his opponents several times with little effort, yet he was described as being as aloof as the savior of Shu Mountain! The background is the overall weakness of Shushan Sword Sect. What's even more disturbing is that every time he takes action, his side will vomit blood and fail miserably. It seems that if you don't write it like this, you can't show the merits of the protagonist? It's acceptable to do this once, but it's really disgusting to do it again and again! 3. The writing is very pale. When I read the abandoned article, I didn't read a sentence that made people's eyes brighten. Not to mention that a certain one can create surprise and resonance. The phrase "the treasure is solemn" has almost become a label for the protagonist's cultivation, which makes people angry. 4. Omit 5,000 words. 5. Don't hesitate to abandon the article!

The first part was okay, but I didn't want to read it after reading more than 200 chapters. It is recommended to look at it from the perspective of the first entry into the previous chapter with more than 200 chapters, because the more than 200 chapters are the corresponding questions. The protagonist is not as fast as the golden finger. As soon as he reaches any realm, 7.8 People of the same realm will come out to die. There are no new ideas, the routines are exactly the same. Also (can I re-evaluate this book? Emmm, my evaluation is average)

I'm really sick of watching it. The same routine is repeated over and over again. The enemy is powerful and will attack me. Shushan will kill him with one sword. Otherwise, it's senior brother and I will deliver the food. The author can't think of any other ideas.

Dreaming about going to Shushan to learn martial arts