Above the Divine Firmament

I hope the old thief can fill in the pitfalls of the first two parts.

Very nice

When I first started reading this novel, I thought it should be good. Then I kept reading more than 500 and saw the male protagonist and the white girl. It was very difficult to read here because the male protagonist's IQ is really too low. He did not consider his friends and apprentices when he did things, and he would be killed by others. I didn't consider it. After seeing this, the male protagonist's ability has not improved. He just keeps talking about how awesome he is.

I like it very much. The content is very exciting. I hope it will be updated soon.

The protagonist is a brainless person who tells others about his cultivation techniques after only meeting them twice.

It was originally written well at the beginning, with a single female protagonist, a male protagonist who is affectionate and devoted, who is affectionate but not cold-blooded, and it doesn't matter how many female apprentices he takes later, but suddenly it is inexplicably written that every female protagonist he meets will want to protect him for the rest of his life. It's so disgusting.

It looks good, but the disadvantage is that the update is too slow. If I were Xiao Chen, I would be stunned by the Italian cannon.

The distinction between immortals and mortals is too bad. It is obviously a major matter of cultivating immortals, but mortals can still know about it. I am really speechless. It feels like writing about martial arts.

Such a perfect plot, so beautiful

The character design is very ordinary, a generation of God Emperor, there is no point of view throughout the whole process, I feel very frustrated watching it. The only motivation I can see here is the many foreshadowings buried there