I Started Cultivating Immortality After Marrying into a Longevity Clan

It's good-looking, but it also has a lot of shortcomings. It's obviously written by this genre, but it can't drive, and the system is a bit low, the rewards are a bit stingy, and the rest is a bit average. Come on, author, you have to reinvent yourself 😂😂

The author of the Stallion novel doesn't know how to describe driving. He just cuts everything out, resulting in a strong sense of disconnection. In addition, the author is too stupid. The protagonist is still practicing at the third level of Qi training in Chapter 130. The arrangement of numerical values ​​is unreasonable, and the author also has problems with the portrayal of the protagonist. He forcibly de-intellects the protagonist and makes the protagonist extremely curious to investigate. The author does not write the protagonist to death. Such an anti-human setting creates a strong sense of separation from reality.

The author writes about the life subsystem and marries a wife and has children. I haven't written a few chapters yet to get rewards for marrying a wife and having children, so I started writing about Machiavellian plots again. After writing the strategy, I wrote about the sect. Just a third-level qi-training son-in-law. He doesn't marry a wife and have children in the family, so he goes to the sect to serve a purpose. Moreover, the protagonist has a golden finger, has no dignity at all in the family, and is still a licker, which is disgusting.

After procrastinating and abandoning the book, I accidentally came across a book with the same name about establishing a long-lasting family from the son-in-law. Only then did I realize that the author had copied a good part of the plot.

You are already a second-level poison master and already invincible. Why are you still building a foundation and cultivating an immortal family? Anyone who casually poisons someone who is not a golden elixir cultivator will die, and he will have to fight with the children who are in the Qi training period in frustration. Die speechless.

The logical level of IQ is too low. Various loopholes. Don't read if you have a good memory! Various settings are inconsistent!

The plot is absurd and childish, and the logic is not rigorous enough.

There is a problem with the setting. There are fifty or sixty children with spiritual roots. The protagonist's qualifications are still low-grade. There is a big problem with the setting. The protagonist is a big stallion. It can also be said that women and children are tools for him to cultivate immortality and immortality. He is an alchemist, and his cultivation is very slow. He also has no way to make his woman immortal. The pills in it are probably only the Foundation Establishment Pill. I haven't seen anyone refining or using the others. And I don't even look at my woman after she dies. I am sad to recover every second.

#Bad-looking Chapter 243: Just practicing the ninth level of Qi. Chapter 287: Beginning to break through the foundation building text. There are many shortcomings in the full text: For example, Yuanying Da Neng's creation of basic skills is only second level and low-grade. The plot progress is seriously delayed (the last one with such a slow pace was Pleasant Goat and Big Big Wolf) If you like Invincible and Shuangwen, don't read it.

I have read more than 400 chapters and can no longer stand it, I have dozens of wives, I have almost 100 children and they are still in the foundation building stage, and my spiritual roots are one or two hundred years old and they are still in the foundation building stage! My wife bought everything for having children! It feels like cultivating immortality for oneself is really losing all humanity! This kind of impersonal book is really boring to read!