League: From the Start, I Got a Lucky Draw System

There are still typos, but they are harmless. Only the section about Da Sima describes Teacher Ma's... Indescribable feeling.

After seeing so many follow-up comments, I also came to build the first floor. The author hastened to update. Let me tell you, I have a friend who also writes novels. He was put in the ICU because he was too slow to read. Let me tell you, you should not imitate him. He is now as cruel as a mummy.

At every stage, something will happen to a beautiful woman, and then a hero will save her. It doesn't matter if you save her once or twice. In this month, she has been rescued five or six times, and every time the beautiful woman has to fall in love, she is a virgin and a licker.

Come on

The protagonist is completely sorry for his age, and even more sorry for his rebirth and system. I don't understand the law. The regulations clearly stipulate that rumors with more than 5k views can be imprisoned. Such a big anchor took the lead in spreading rumors with clear and conclusive evidence, and then the protagonist went to apologize? My suggestion is not to write about women, and don't write about cheats or cheats. Just go for whatever you can get. Writing a hodgepodge at the beginning is more appropriate than pretending to be a sheep, making an e-sports title, and then writing a daily pretentious and slap-in-the-face article.

The author of the plot can't even remember it, and the character names are also confused. The background is in the timeline of rebirth. Where did the bright expressions come from? There are also many heroes whose skills were changed a long time ago. At that time, they were still the original versions, which made me speechless. The one with a lot of female characters is probably a harem story, so I'll give it up.

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Is this the rhythm to continue licking?

For this substitute member, maybe this is a fact, but the real society is like this. There are too many feelings in life now, come on, everyone here!

Originally, I wasn't going to bind my mobile phone number to write a book review, but Chapter 38 left me speechless and mad at me.