Online Games: The Supreme Overlord

You are a majestic Sword Lord, one of the three legends. You will look ugly six or seven times when you hit an ordinary monster, and you will be excited several times. What the hell kind of master are you like this? The number of water words is not so watery either.

This book is very beautiful😁

If compared to a 60-point essay question on an exam, I would give it 20 points. The adjective "extreme" accounts for more than 90% of the entire book. It can be used to describe everything and anything, and it doesn't matter whether it is correct or not😅

I like this book very much

Let me tell you about my feelings. I was bored after reading it. Remember the author said the mythical beast Behemoth that Dao Zun obtained was the silver Behemoth before. Why did the mythical beast become a holy beast before the hunting battle? How did it change from silver to bronze?

If there are an average of 3,000 words in a chapter, less than 1,000 words are devoted to fighting monsters. I even think that sometimes there are less than 600 words to write about fighting monsters and monster-fighting. Explaining the reason for the split is always too much and goes off topic. What is the purpose of writing? It was like it was dripping before, it is dripping now, or it is dripping now. It was dripping again before. It was too detailed, too detailed, and everything about fighting monsters was written incidentally. I feel like Zhang Zhang was impatient and forced himself to write some, and there were too many trolls.

It will just burst out, burst out, and burst out almost no less than five times in one chapter.

There are too many repeated sentences, with three or four repeated sentences in two paragraphs. It's not very comfortable to watch. After writing for so many years, I feel that my writing style has become worse.

There was a look of solemnity on his face. Is this a whisper?

This is a very nice book.