The Ming Dynasty's Rebellious Son

The author's skills are really good. When writing historical novels, he is afraid of randomly changing history. There is no golden finger, and the protagonist does not seem to be cheating, building rockets and planes, etc. The author has made appropriate use of himself based on the technological level of the time. It is really amazing. , A small suggestion to the author, that is, when writing about a person, such as Chongzhen, there is no need to say that Chongzhen was suspicious and conceited every other paragraph. Just say it at the beginning, and every time something happens later, talk about what happened to Chongzhen, which is a bit of a waste of space.

It's really a combination of words, it's so annoying

It's well written, but there's too much water

After reading more than 100 chapters, I found that the author is not writing a novel... But using historical word count. The novel should be like a novel, basically introducing history. One chapter counts you 3,000 words and 2,500 words before talking about history. You can quote the introduction, but don't over-quote. You can develop the parallel world as you like. Even if you write about the Qin Dynasty, it will be fine if the protagonist chaos rises into the new dynasty. After reading more than a hundred chapters, I didn't feel like I was reading a novel at all, I just felt like I was reading a history book.

I really have been tricked by the devil. There is still writing in the front, but the back is like a lazy woman's foot wrap, smelly and long.

Too much water?

The author is using historical content to make up the word count. If it is correct, it is fine, but he is afraid of making random quotations. Readers can read the first few chapters and the table of contents for the rest, because the content is mediocre. It is recommended that the author just write stories and quote less scriptures. I hope the authorities can rectify this behavior of cramming the number of words.

This author cheated me out of the manuscript fee just for the sake of a low word count. It contains a lot of unnecessary information and introductions. It is not recommended to read.

Through this book, I gained a systematic understanding of the late Ming Dynasty and gained knowledge. The storyline is fascinating, exciting, and beautiful! 👍

One question is too long-winded and one introduction is too complicated.