The Brocade-Clad Top Scholar

See Chapter 4. After the protagonist encounters a false accusation after traveling through time, he immediately analyzes the matter clearly? After traveling through time, you were not surprised at all, you got used to it immediately? Doesn't anyone think it's abnormal when a little kid is gesticulating? It took 3 days to renovate the yard and dry it with salt? The writing is too taken for granted. After careful consideration, I feel that many places are strange and cannot stand up to scrutiny.

After reading over a hundred chapters, I just couldn't stand it anymore. The head of the Zhu family is obviously plotting against the property of the protagonist and his family, blatantly asking for monthly money. Most of the village elders are present, and they directly ask the debtors to pay, and they also ask people who owe money to the protagonist's family not to pay back. What a weird thing is this? What are they asking these village elders to do? Do you think their master is powerful and domineering? The master plotted against the protagonist and asked him to go home to study. The protagonist's mother also thought that she was a close relative of the same family and would not harm the protagonist. After so many things happened in the past, she was still so naive. The grandmother is blatantly persecuting the protagonist's family, but her mother still can't see clearly and thinks it's for their own good. This is stupidity, not filial piety! What's more, the protagonist doesn't tell his mother and others about what he wants to do, but insists on doing it directly. He knows that his mother doesn't have much vision and doesn't communicate! There is also the situation after leaving Anlu, I feel that there are only a few words in it. Personal opinion!

The whole book gives people the impression that it is dark overall (after reading half of it, I felt bad, and it felt a lot darker), and self-conscious. The last one was exaggerated and not as well written as the first one. Even that one also had scheming and other tactics, which at least seemed normal. Each character has his or her own characteristics. This book took little thought, is not compact enough, and the writing skills have been greatly reduced.

Author, are you sure this is for people to read?

It really doesn't look good! 7-Year-olds know so much! Are all ancient people so simple? Jinyiwei, that is a professional spy agency. With so many abnormalities in a 7-year-old child, how could he be so indulgent? Don't the time travelers still know how to hide their clumsiness?

It's long-winded, a small thing is magnified infinitely, nonsense, alas, I am speechless just to make up the word count.

Personally, I think this novel is okay. Although the development of technology is a bit exaggerated, the whole novel is relatively coherent.

Author? How come Tang Bohu was born in the Ming Dynasty?

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