The Beginning of the Prehistoric Era, Killing the Time-Travelers

Well, let me tell you, Haotian (the Jade Emperor) is actually the boy of ancestor Hongjun, not Li Er (Laozi). Apart from this error, this book is actually very good. I hope the author will correct this error.

Houtu milk cap is particularly interesting

Inexplicably, he allowed his opponent to act unscrupulously, claiming that he had everything under control. With water in his head, Shen Gongbao has always been an evangelist, so how could he intercept the traitors? Writers don't even have common sense, so they deserve not to make any money.

I have never seen such fresh and refined writing style, I hope the author will write more.

The author's thinking is so clear and strange, it's like deflating from the lower body.

The subject matter is very novel, and it is a breath of fresh air in ancient literature. There is no protagonist in the middle, so it is understandable that he is a saint after all. There are many typos and I hope the author pays attention to them. The writing and plot are quite good, and there are laughs. Overall, I can give it four and a half stars out of five.

It was okay at the beginning, but it became boring later on when traveling westward.

This novel always feels like the author is out of tune, and in the end he is completely wrong! It's okay in the early stage, but it all depends on water in the later stage.

It looks good, but there is no sky in the middle.

It looks good, but there are many things wrong with the places in The Ancient World and Journey to the West. For example, I wrote about the seventy-two transformations of Tiangang and the thirty-six transformations of Earthly Evil.