The Queen Comes First: Cultivating Immortality, but Never Forgetting to Spoil My Husband

The overall feeling is good, but the ending is a bit perfunctory. I should have abandoned the article... I haven't finished writing the heroine's space. The elves are still sealed and waiting for her to be unsealed. Also, the cheap master in the heroine's space hasn't met you yet. I feel like there are still many characters that have not been fully written.

Haha... Although I feel like my eyes are watering, I still finished reading it. Fortunately, it's the first time I've read a female protagonist's article, and it's the first time I've seen something that's not 1 VS 1. It satisfies a woman's vanity and greed a little bit, haha. The short story is pretty good!

I feel like I was entertained by a primary school student...

You also came into this world with others full of love and expectations, so please don't underestimate yourself anymore. Whether you are happy or bad, everything will always be sunny🌸🌸🌸🌸

I haven't finished reading it yet… The author's writing style is so poor. The good plot is hard-written and messy. It's like reading aloud and makes people unable to get into it.

It's easy to read (˶ᵔᵕᵔ˶), but the heroine's early character is a bit inconsistent with her later character (●.●). Of course, it can also be attributed to the difference in the first perspective, but overall it's very beautiful💫⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾ I'm so happy that I'm flying

The plot is novel, bold, innovative, and exciting, but the ending is a bit hasty and simply introduces the heroine's master's official career and the heroine's master-disciple relationship, the heroine's master's personal love affair with the heroine who is also the heroine's master, and the emotional experience of the heroine Shiyou. It ends without the wonderful scene of the heroine and her two husbands cultivating immortals.

How can I put it, the heroine's husband Su Ze felt unworthy, so gentle and sunny, but the heroine mistook him for her brother and married him, and later married his brother, and he himself knew that the heroine loved his brother the most. The heroine only felt guilty for Su Ze, and Su Ze was willing to be their foil. Later, In the ending, the heroine took her brother to the sky with her. Su Ze clearly did nothing wrong. He also regarded his brother's many children as his own and almost gave up his name. The heroine was never there when he was in danger. When he was about to die, he insisted that his will was not that of the heroine but his brother's children. In the end, he was left alone on the mainland, while his brother and the daughter The protagonist has soared. I can't say that the author's writing is not good, but the writing style is a bit messy. The most distressing thing is Su Ze. He was seduced by the heroine out of nowhere and married to the heroine on the first night. However, the heroine said that he recognized the wrong person and wanted to share a wife with his brother. He also said that he didn't mind, and the brother didn't seem to like his younger brother that much. , Because he knows that he doesn't want much, he just asks the heroine to give him a little care. His brother gave birth to four children, and he gave birth to two, and the four children born by his brother are mostly described in the article. There is almost no plot behind En En (Su Ze's children), only that he was good at using poison when he was a child. Alas, I feel so sad.

I wrote a student-like journal composition, and I felt like I was entertained😋

How can I put it, the more I read, the more I felt like a fool, and I really felt that I was wrong. Although I really like reading novels of this style, the plot really made me think of me as a child. There were so many typos that I abandoned the article after more than ten chapters. Maybe it was because of different tastes, but I really felt that the more I read, the more I thought I was a fool. . . . . . 😖😖😖