I Severed My Ties of Love, and Now My Senior Brother and Master Regret It

The big frame is good... But the heroine is not very smart. No matter in the previous life or this life, her IQ is not half that of the villain. The description of this life has always been driven by the plot rather than the protagonist. It has always been passive and relies purely on cheating and chance.

Silly book, the heroine is not half as smart as the villain

The villain treats the heroine like a dog. From the perspective of the heroine, she looks irritating. From the villain's perspective, she looks at Feng Aotian, who is pure and unscrupulous and ruthless.

I don't know why the rating is so high. The whole plot is quite disgusting. The left and right brains are fighting each other in the text. The heroine will feel sad when she meets those who hurt her. The people who help her can't even express their expressions. Others are kind enough to teach her swordsmanship. She is ungrateful. In the past, those people were too lazy to offend her. She posted them again and kept abusing the heroine. She wrote the heroine so stupid. I thought it was a cool novel. The result made me sick. It is rare to see a female protagonist who is not a big heroine.

Stupid book. The heroine is so stupid.

A lot of foreshadowing was laid in the early stage, but the foreshadowing was very sloppy, which made it hard for me to accept that when the author wrote about one thing, he would forget all the foreshadowing. For example, the villain Jiang Xi, I really didn't hear about him until after reading many chapters, and his death was very sudden, and there was no particularly big event. It was a long, long time before he appeared again. There is also the little fox spirit pet that I obtained. After returning to the demon clan, there was no news about him. I made some clever ideas on Ning Baibai's name. In the end, I always wanted to see them reunited, but in the end, I only gave one person to help the demon clan retreat for ten thousand years. There is also the demon turned into obsession. Although this foreshadowing was filled in, it really took a long, long time for him to appear. After the foreshadowing of a favorite character was laid, it was filled in in a hurry, and then disappeared after filling it out. . . I hope the author will change it. Qingsi has been mentioned all the time in the front, and there is nothing else to fill in Qingsi later. In fact, it looks fine to me from the front. The heroine is very good. The more I look at the back, the more uncomfortable I feel. After one thing happens, he will have nothing to do with the others. It seems that they are all behind, but in fact, I feel that there is no bond at all. Like Baihun, Qingfeng, there are no other opportunities and foreshadowing in the back. They are just foreshadowing. Is it a stepping stone for the heroine on the road to success? I no longer have the energy to read to the end. I saw the heroine rushing into the river of time regardless of everything and resurrecting her parents. This book can already be finished in my heart. I hope the author can improve his writing and revise the article. It will be better. Come on, author.

I finally found a book about female immortality that I like. This is the first time I've seen someone who doesn't insist on killing the villain by himself, but instead asks a strong person for help when there is support from a strong person. I just feel that the names of the moves are not too advanced, and there are some things about understanding the Tao. I feel that the things I have learned are a bit ordinary, or maybe I am reading too fast. However, these things are few and do not affect the reading experience. There is no plot like other novels about slaps in the face and other people's regrets. In the early stage, he was bullied very miserably. After all, the protagonist has not been exposed to so many dangers in the world in the past. Later, wanting to be beaten to death is a normal sign of disappointment and helplessness. After that, there is no need for scheming at all. Many people, good or bad, died when they deserved it, and the really important people were not killed at once, which made me sad and then happy. I personally don't like plots where the most important people are killed. It didn't describe the protagonist's thoughts too much. Through the words, I could really feel the feeling of being emotionless and just doing what I felt should be done. She would leave a Poseidon Fruit for Li Yunyun because she was the one she wanted to take care of, but she would also change her mind because of her changes. However, there was no plot in the process where he told her that he originally wanted to give it to her, but now he doesn't want to give it to her, and then the other party felt uncomfortable. Good review. I never expected that the girl who relied on the protagonist would say such cruel words to the protagonist for a man 100 years later. However, considering that they have been in love for hundreds of years and have only been with the protagonist for four or five years, it can only be said that things have really changed. It takes all the time needed to practice, and you won't reach the top in ten years. When the person who had helped me wanted to duel with others, I thought the protagonist would help him practice and show off his power, but I didn't expect that she would directly and severely damage the other sect without leaving any trace. All in all, this novel is quite to my liking. There is no bad language and no differences between men and women. It is very comfortable to read and feels truly equal. Everything depends on one's own strength. The plot is also quite reasonable, and there are not too many hints about the plot behind it. I didn't feel anxious while watching it. I watched it lightly, but I wasn't bored at all. I liked this feeling. However, I feel that very few people have read it. I hope more people who share the same frequency can discover this novel, and I also hope that the author's writing style will get better and better♥(｡￫v￩｡)♥

It starts high and goes low, incomprehensible, the plot is sloppy, the main characters are offline too quickly, new characters come and go quickly, and the rest is simply muddled and out of the big frame. The writing gets worse and worse.

The heroine is of no use except calling her Master, and she feels so stupid. I stopped reading halfway through. I've seen that 40% of them still don't see the usefulness of the female protagonist.

It was okay in the early stage, but later on I felt more and more that the heroine was a bit stupid and she kept accepting it passively.