Reborn as the Legitimate Daughter

Very nice! The description of Lu Jingyuan is too vivid. From a poor student who relied on his first wife, to a scumbag who vowed to be together forever, and later married a bunch of concubines, he did not hesitate to sell his children and daughters in order to be promoted from the sixth to the fifth rank official. However, because of the guidance of his eldest daughter, he was promoted from the third rank. An irresponsible person who was afraid of being promoted, but He is a very lucky person who has become a winner in life without any struggle. You can feel that he went from being ruthless to being irresponsible to being a coward and then trying hard to change, and finally became a responsible father and grandfather. The gradual process is reasonable and reasonable. In the novel, he meets powerful male and female protagonists. Such a result is not unexpected. The author is great! I still have more to say, and I feel that the author can write two more chapters. The ending is very happy, but unreasonable. How can the parents leave the seven-year-old emperor to live happily!

I still finished reading it. I really hate the character of the heroine. She is cowardly and indecisive. After being reborn, she is still so stupid and behaves like this. She says she can't marry the hero, but she accepts his help every time. Without the hero, she doesn't know how many times she will die. The heroine is reborn, not time-traveled, so why are so many words used in modern times and illogical? Also, the heroine is not the emperor's concubine, so how can she be called a concubine? Isn't she supposed to be a concubine? Why didn't the heroine's brother and the overlord flower end in the end 😂

In order to compose new words, I forcefully express my sorrow. The daughter of a sixth-grade official was all pretentious and unwilling in front of the general, but she took advantage of the general's power. After offending a lot of people, I still feel that no one will care about my father, a sixth-grade official. This is when the heroine is blessed with all kinds of luck

Everyone knows what the heroine is doing when she is reborn. She suddenly says that her own mother was killed and comes back to take revenge. Then she suddenly puts the whole Lu family on her shoulders. The concubine and concubine become her responsibility. The aunt can yell at the legitimate daughter for being mean and contradicting the master in front of the whole family. If she doesn't develop her career properly, she just cares about this and that without any ability. She is overestimating her own abilities and is self-righteous. Instead of setting up such a strong male protagonist, the female protagonist is nothing.

The heroine was very sassy when she appeared on the stage, and then she withered away... If the author had not created the character so strongly, he would not have made the heroine appear too strong when she appeared, so that the heroine could show a little timidity and a little strength... In chapter 80, the heroine asked the hero not to come close to her, in chapter 180, the heroine begged the hero to let her go, and in chapter 280, the heroine was still begging the hero to let her go... Yue Lao saw it and cut the red line with scissors, cursed and said, "Get out of here."

It's super interesting. I'm waiting to read more. I wonder if the author has any other novels?

I got involved because this book is at the top of many lists, and I think it should be a good article that everyone recognizes. After reading it from beginning to end, I felt completely confused and questioned the credibility of the list. Let's talk about the advantages first. This book is really long... It's quite hard to write with so many authors. The overall story direction is okay, some minor characters are interesting, and the heroine has some bad words. As for the problem, it may be too long. The author just immersed himself in writing. The plot, logic, characters, and language are all full of errors and omissions. I am afraid that 80% of the comments in the whole text are complaining. Because there are so many problems, I will only mention a few that are particularly uncomfortable. In terms of the plot, I often write down the later parts and forget the earlier ones, and there are confusing mistakes and omissions. For example, the heroine's child will not be born after a long time, the heroine's sister will give birth just after she is pregnant, the pure concubine's child is Schrödinger's child, and she will be pregnant for a while... For example, when Lu Miao fell in love, she said that the man only had a paralyzed mother, and the heroine was afraid that she would suffer if she married her. After they got married, her parents-in-law would come to Beijing to make trouble... For example, the emperor liked the children born from an affair between a pure concubine and a prince very much, and directly named them after his grandchildren, as if he had jumped out of a prophet... There are also many logical problems. For example, the heroine's title to the emperor is never correct from beginning to end. When she should be called a minister's daughter, she is called a civilian daughter, when she is supposed to be called a minister's wife, she is called a minister's concubine. For example, when Brother Yang replaced Mo Xiao, he was surrounded by two hundred guards and needed the help of the male and female protagonists before they fled in panic. When Yong Ye was by his side, he said that it would be okay even if there were thousands of troops. For example, sometimes he refuses to go to the door because of his big belly, sometimes he repeatedly bumps into other people's carriages because of his big belly. A child who is just one month old can grasp Zhou Zhou and kick jade seals. He can speak fluently at one or two years old and can also dance a sword... For another example, Miss Du broke into the palace, beat the prince, and interrupted the court meeting. Her various rampant actions were completely inconsistent with the environment setting, and it ended without explaining whether the two of them succeeded or not. In terms of character design, the heroine frequently overthrows and re-establishes others. While flaunting her kindness, she is selfish and despises human life. While taking your loved ones very seriously, you use tricks to push your loved ones into danger. Standing and standing again, the three views are fragmented. The most uncomfortable thing is that the sister of the second aunt's family was killed by her uncle. The heroine initially expressed her heartache in a righteous manner, but later when her own interests were involved, she immediately changed her story and said that it was just a sister who died. Why did she think that everyone owed her. In addition, Brother Yang's character is also very good. He fell in love with her even though they had only met her a few times and had no interaction. She fell in love but still refused to be together. The man disappeared and the woman wanted to get married. She didn't fight for the opportunity even though she had the opportunity. She had to wait for the woman to get married to spy on the couple in the same room, harm the woman's husband's family, and make things worse before eloping. There are countless language problems, including typos, misuse of words and idioms, failure to convey the meaning, and many common-sense mistakes. For example, "no news" is used to describe quietness, and bleeding from "the skirt of clothes" is used when hitting a board. The scenes described in this detail are briefly described, such as the debate in court; the useless chatter cannot be passed for several screens, such as every quarrel of the heroine. Wrong sentences and nonsense literature frequently appear, and the author has a paranoid love for certain words and sentences. For example, if there is a context that requires you to be humble and petty, you will "give in"; if it involves a context that is embarrassing, you will "hang yourself with noodles"; if you swear, you will be "struck by lightning." All of the above are repeated at a high frequency, which is mind-numbing. There are so many of these. The entire article gives the impression that the text is rough and the details are unreasonable, making it difficult to read carefully and carefully. It makes people feel that the author is either young or not well educated. Of course, it is not easy to write so much, and it is worthy of encouragement, but being on the top of the list is unworthy of the name, and it is unnecessary. I don't mean to be malicious by writing so much. I just feel that the author who writes so much must also like to create. I hope he can improve his skills, pay attention to details, and produce more masterpieces.

The character of the female protagonist is really bad. Of course, the male protagonist is also very greasy. I think the author has never been in love.

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I read Chapter 700 and can't stand it anymore. I saw that after the two got married, someone was trying to trick people into the backyard. The heroine's methods are too bad. Some parts of the front make me feel aggrieved. The heroine is not outstanding at all. She is arrogant to her own family and is soft-hearted towards outsiders. She also has too many concerns. She can't do it, and she has no patience.