I Became the Goddess' Alchemy Furnace

The beginning is a little loose, but the protagonist accepts the system so easily? You might say that it's fine that he traveled through time, but he is a person from this world! Also, since you can reach such an awesome state, you must have killed a lot of people and met a lot of people. At least the character will not be like the author wrote, which is extremely unreasonable. Furthermore, the heroine should be very beautiful. The beginning of the plot is deliberately "little beggar, little beggar". Oh my god, overall it is a bit intellectual.

I feel like the heroine can dig holes in her life experience. It would be best to have some disputes with the male protagonist's past life. This is a good emotional novel. The male protagonist's power and partners in his previous life are worth digging into. The male and female protagonists can be separated for a period of time due to external forces in the middle and later stages. In addition, the heroine's cultivation level directly goes from Qi Practitioner to Foundation Establishment. I think this way of writing is too unreasonable. First, the foundation is not solid, and second, cheating is too obvious. Take appropriate time to write down the details of your improvement in cultivation. The main plot of this book is the heroine. You can write a plot where the female protagonist is attracted by the male villain or something. But this is not a long-term solution. So I suggest developing more love stories with female supporting characters. Cultivation plot. Joining a sect and going through trials are indispensable, and the female protagonist should not take the male protagonist route. When carrying out treasure hunting and killing, you can move appropriately, eat soft rice plots, and let dogs bite dogs. It would be better if the heroine is innocent and kind, but not ignorant and a little sinister. The hero should not change into a human being. You can imitate Conan's appropriate transformation. The male protagonist does not need to take the path of cultivation. Take the auxiliary line. But as a book about cultivating immortals, there must be someone who takes the path of cultivating oneself. The male protagonist's skills can range from formations, weapon refining, and elixir refining. The world view is not strong, and there is no focus on covering the cities and forces in this interface. There are also many beautiful girls in the world of immortality. Routes for female supporting characters and male protagonists can also be conceived. My suggestion is that the focus is on cultivation. Cultivation of immortality. Cultivation cannot be ignored. When the heroine goes back to protect her master, I think there should be a big battle. I feel that sitting down is too inconsistent with the strength of the heroine. Once there is no male protagonist, you cannot face some small plots alone. No hydrology. Each chapter must tell a story. Come on and support you, I hope the author will reply to me

Come on, author! I hope you can write better.

It looks great. When will the male protagonist be able to reshape his body? When will the heroine completely fall in love with the hero? I just like to see plots where the male and female protagonists are jealous of each other. I hope the author writes more. That's why I added it to my bookshelf👀

Good looking, good looking.

Is what you write also called a novel? I have written more than a hundred chapters, and the protagonist is shouting to kill this and that every day, but so far he has not killed anyone. The pure Virgin, he can be killed directly, but he has to let him go. He will find it again next time and feel uncomfortable. Author, you don't have any plot to write, so you can only keep writing like this with a villain?

I really enjoyed watching the protagonist get jealous, and I hope I can write better and better. And I think it is appropriate to allow some misunderstandings between the heroine and the hero, because when the misunderstanding is resolved, the relationship between the two will be better. For example, there is a woman who becomes good friends with the heroine, but the hero discovers that the reason why the woman has a good relationship with the heroine is because she discovered the extraordinary power of the hero's alchemy furnace. So the male protagonist informed the female protagonist, and the female protagonist also had a conflict with the male protagonist. Then the heroine was assassinated by the woman, and the hero was also injured because of protecting the heroine. Finally the two got back together. The author can write a lighter version of the conflict, but try to write a little bit of conflict, because the heroine and the hero cannot always have a harmonious relationship, and you can also arouse the reader's mood by writing this way. Of course, some people may criticize and criticize the heroine, so you have to decide what to do. Of course, this is just my opinion, and the decision is yours. Finally, I wish the author good luck and happiness to his family, and the more he writes, the better his works will be. 😃😄😁😝😜😚

I just want to know when the male protagonist will have a body

It's so useless, the clay figurine is also a bit rustic. Others try to hurt her, but she keeps forgiving.

Very good book I hope the author will work hard ＾0＾~