I Invested Millions at the Beginning, and I Became a Great Emperor by Relying on the Rebates!

I'm really used to seeing the fighting and killing in the world of immortality. This book brings real business methods into the world of immortality. It's quite interesting anyway.

At present, I have planted this novel. It is invincible, but it feels too bland. The emotional plot of the protagonist could be richer, and there is no battle plot. The male protagonist was cursed in the early stage and could not practice. It felt like pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger. As a result, the other protagonist template characters in the article have too little presence. It can build a larger world view. The protagonist grew up to be invincible without experiencing combat. Everyone around him kneels and licks the protagonist. I hope to improve it.

I've read half of it and here's my opinion: 1: Fantasy theme, isn't it urban literature that always revolves around the Chamber of Commerce to make money? Although it is said that the system requires investment to get a return, there is no need to do it like this. Just for the little bit of cultivation in return, the protagonist uses the system to operate like this to show high IQ performance? 2: Author, this is the world of immortality, not a city! What kind of charity foundation is this? The world of cultivating immortals is not about intrigues, demons making trouble, or two sects fighting to the death! You have set up a Zishan Foundation, but why are two sects half-fighting, and one of them is about to be exterminated, and you set up a Zishan Foundation to persuade him? 3: Anyway, I can't stand it anymore, so I need to save it in my mind before watching it! I've read more than 50 chapters! It's possible that I'll write better later, but I can't stand it now.

Good, clear thinking. Speed ​​up the update speed, don't be imitated, but surpass you.

Quick update, let me tell you the number! One day…20 chapters!!!

Very good, very good, very good. (Say important things three times)

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It was okay at first, but now it is just water. Let me ask you, are you a cultivator or do you just want to be Ma Huateng? You must be sick, this is getting less and less creative. At least 40 chapters have not talked about cultivating immortals, they are all about business.

A plot that you can guess just by watching it

There is nothing to say, I can only say that it is very good. To put it simply, the author wants to change the situation in the world of immortality and confront various geniuses.