The Unbeaten War King

Ye Chen, a veteran of the Ye family, came to give Ye Lingtian a thumbs up!

The biggest flaw is that the description is long-winded, and there are two female protagonists, one of whom can't do anything, one is dead, one only cries and worries, the other is dead after meeting each other without knowing each other, and she is looking for death and takes a sword, just tell her if she wants to die.

Looks good, keep chasing

The plot is good, but it's verbose. Please speed up the fight scenes. I want to see the fight with Zeus sooner.

Is the city going to become a cultivator? The city is not a city, ancient times are not ancient times, and cultivating immortals is not cultivating immortals. I am writing about you🐴 It's a mixed bag.

Many chapters are just trying to make up the word count.

The whole process was about talking about no one, it was all nonsense, it was like a hodgepodge.

There are too many mental descriptions, which affects the reader's mood! !

Most of the nonsense

After reading Chapter 27... I laughed until my stomach hurt... Author, where did you get the courage to express your decisiveness? If you don't understand what decisive killing means, you can check it on Baidu or call 114 to ask.