The Carefree Son-in-Law

Wonderful plot and smooth sentences

Look, I've finished reading it and leave a good review for Jidiande. The whole article doesn't say anything, it's just that I was reborn, I'm awesome, I have many women, I unified the world, that's all.

It's a bit long-winded. Every time I pretend to be 13, there is so much nonsense. Why do I always like to scold the protagonist bloody and then reverse the situation? People who have been reborn are still so childish and have no authority at all.

The author can travel through the Tang Dynasty, the director of the West Factory

No matter what you wrote, a grandmaster can't beat the heavenly level. And this protagonist, is there any difference between him and a loser? He feels wronged at every turn, and after hundreds of years of cultivation, he has become a dog.

The main character didn't say more than ten sentences in each picture, the supporting characters talked nonsense, bad reviews

How come only one of the other women of the protagonist is left in the end, and are the other women ignored? Too much of a scumbag

You've done a good job at the beginning, but what the heck is that at the end? You've written the finale in one chapter, but the ending behind it isn't too watery, right?

The protagonist is mentally retarded.

The ending was too sudden, so it would be considered an article worth 60 points at most.