This Sect Is Not Very Good

This book is different from other genres in that it is a combination of time travel and system. But its system does not have only one host like other systems. Instead, there is a place in Sumeru City in each universe where you can communicate with the people who own the system. The beginning and end of this book echo each other. The psychological activities, demeanor, and action descriptions of the characters in this book are extremely vivid, unlike other protagonists who have a smooth face and no highlights. I hope the author can continue to work hard!

The language of this book is exquisite, the plot is beautiful, and one link after another is really beautiful. But there are also many shortcomings. For example, the protagonist was born as a time traveler and had a son and a daughter during his lifetime, but he died later. But how come the protagonist who has been in love is a novice in the word love when he is in another world? But the author is not a sage and can understand it. But I can't understand why you suck at the end. Even if you really return to Earth later, you should at least write about how the protagonist pretends to be so cool that he becomes invincible and unites the whole country. Then with the power of the whole country, he will fight back to the other world, turn his hands into clouds, and turn his hands into rain. Invincible therefore, repay the love debt. You can also resurrect your children, wives, and so on. And the author, don't you plan to make a second part to fill in the pit before moving on? For example, the ten-year empire, and that sect called that, the protagonist and the protagonist would talk to a woman every night when they have nothing to do. The story and plot of that woman should be written in detail, so I can leave it in my mind. And what do you mean now, just write the beginning and it will be gone. It is said that everything has a cause and effect, and a composition has a beginning, a process, and an end. The same is true for novels. You just start with this, and what will happen after the end? Should we think about it ourselves? ? ? ? ? ?

Come on, author, I think it looks pretty good, but there are a lot of typos and people's names are wrong, but the flaws don't hide the good points, come on!

Brother, what kind of ending is this for you👿👿👿

The protagonist is not very good, the author has not explained the protagonist yet, the protagonist is unclear, and everything is not surprising at all. The author has a problem with his outlook on life. The plot is confusing and makes no sense at all. The writing style, have you noticed that the writing style is all dictated by the author?

Holding the biggest golden finger, he is humiliated and looked down upon by others all day long. He is scolded and humiliated by others and wants to kill him, but he still smiles calmly. It is such a silly character creation.

Bullshit ending

Too short too short

This novel is very interesting. It's very interesting, but the ending is too sloppy.

The ending is too ridiculous