Immortal Alchemy Lord

Be engaging.

Quite beautiful, the more you look at it, the better it looks

It's not that it doesn't look good, it's just average. The problem is that this author likes to moan without reason. The title is long and the artistic conception is high, not concise and clear. It is deliberately written to elevate the artistic conception. There is no level progression and foil. The same is true in the article. However, the corresponding content and the level of the protagonist cannot control the artistic conception and height at all, making the reader feel that he is completely moaning without reason. For example, in the first few pictures, the protagonist is a novice who knows nothing in Novice Village. His level is low, his life experience is short, his age is too young, and he is not capable of rebirth. However, if you look at the title and the artistic conception of the content in the article, it is said that there is no immortal in the world, and there is no immortal in the world. There are also many words that are deliberately written to create artistic conception, which are not things that should be written at the level of the protagonist. It's like a primary school student lamenting the joys and sorrows of the world, life and death, talking about the injustices in the world, and wanting to be the strongest person in the world in the future. Although this is sometimes true, it sounds funny to us outsiders. Because these experiences of primary school students are not enough to master these things. The protagonist doesn't understand anything and needs to experience it. The readers grow up step by step with the protagonist. Only after you have experienced it can you write about it to set off this artistic conception.

I woke up and changed...

This book is very well written, but there are too few updates.

The book is rich in content and very good

Bullshit; when others update data, one picture is one chapter; but if you are sneaking around, one picture is four chapters.

Very good

This is indeed too slow, right?

The plot is exciting and the writing is brilliant. The more you watch, the better it gets.