The Beginning of the Prehistoric Era: Defeating the Chaos Qinglian

I am Tuo.

Very good

After becoming a saint from the beginning, what else do you want to do? Break the sky. Break the universe. But I know how you feel about writing a good novel, but you can't write randomly. We the readers. This is to read better novels, not to read your random writing here.

After reading it, I felt that it started but ended in a tailspin. The front was magnificent, but the back was just full of fun and suddenly disappeared. It's like watching Qing Yu Nian 1, yelling and cursing. A bad director and a bad screenwriter. They had just given a twist in the plot and before I had any sense of it, the power went out permanently. From the beginning to the end of the plot, it is actually two or N programmers operating, and finally the system restarts. There are only the protagonist's thoughts and individual embellishments in the middle. There is no detailed explanation of the war background, no detailed explanation of the magic weapon, no detailed explanation of the circuitous story, no detailed voice of the supporting actor, and no detailed description of love and hatred. In the end, the enamored Hongyun did not see happiness coming, and the protagonist almost received the lunch box, and had to restart the system and start over.

Nice

The plot is confusing and the ending is sudden

The plot doesn't make sense! Too messy

It's a complete mess

Author, Yang Jian is the nephew of the Jade Emperor

Messy, bad, too bad