Yutian

In addition to the fact that the realm is often written incorrectly, which leaves readers confused, and the magical powers I learned are never used, and the people caught are forgotten, the writing is actually quite interesting, but it is wrong to say that it is finished when it is clearly not finished yet.

This author is just like writing a flowing novel. He writes wherever he thinks and what he comes up with. There is no correspondence between the previous and the last. Earlier, it was said that the tenth villain among the top ten villains will be promoted to the Earth Yuan realm and killed by the protagonist. More than two hundred chapters later, the top ten villains are mentioned, and the third ranked villain is only at the first level of the Pulse Condensation Realm. Isn't this nonsense?

The previous Immortal Conference was indeed a bit rushed, but the decisive battle from the Upper Kingdom to the Ancient Kingdom was definitely written well enough, especially the "conjunction" of "Don't panic"😁👀👍

The protagonist's strength grows too slowly!

For rubbish books, three times the time would take three months. In total, it would take nine months to reach the initial small realm. You can't fight beyond the level yet. Then it will take hundreds of years to reach a small realm in the later stage, right? What's the use of getting two immortal treasures? Leveling up is too slow and you can't fight beyond the level? No wonder no one is watching

Why is the chapter "Eight Hundred Years Update" still posted online? Where to stand? If it doesn't work, just take it off the shelves.

I think it's okay. It doesn't matter if the author doesn't want to write it.

Spicy Chicken Plot Spicy Chicken Writing

The front part is okay, but the back part is a mess.

The main characters are all written as trash.