Xuanhuan: Exiled from the Start, Rewarded with an Emperor's Bones

The author posted the chapters without checking. The protagonist is sometimes a member of the Heavenly Demon Palace, and sometimes he is a member of the Imperial Court. The protagonist is fighting against the Chu family of the Imperial Court, but in the next sentence it becomes the Chu family of the Heavenly Demon Palace. The messy chapters are very difficult to listen to and read smoothly!

The children of the same family, as the emperor's son, have the goal of killing the protagonist since he was born, and they are the same as those old people who harmed the protagonist. Such a thing actually became the protagonist's woman? ? ? What kind of trouble is this?

Very nice

A common problem among novice writers is that the chapters and sentences are confusing. This author is a little better. Compared with other new writers, at least the description of the environment and characterization are okay, but the rest is just average. Summary: I can watch it, but the level needs to be improved. I can look forward to future works.

There is a female protagonist, she is from the Imperial Court

I just feel that since the protagonist of the Road to Immortality is so strong, doesn't he belong to the Imperial Court? If he didn't do that at the beginning, he would also be able to take advantage of it. If he had to wipe it out and then the Heavenly Demon Palace, then it would be so bad... The overall feeling is a bit contradictory. Some are looking for a path for the latter (Emperor Court) and some want to become immortals. It feels so contradictory.

The emotional line between Chu Mingyue and the protagonist is simply inexplicable, a mess

The messy Jin Emperor Can Nian can kill the Quasi-Emperor, and Xian Can Nian is killed by the protagonist Fa Xiang. It's so funny.