A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Starting as a Menial Worker in the Scrap Pill Room!

I am the author's Chinese teacher, and I am very grateful to all readers for your compliments. I would like to apologize to all the readers. Because of my poor teaching skills, the author has a series of problems such as typos and misspellings, poor ability to form words and sentences, illogical writing, incompatible preface and follow-up... Etc. Please forgive me.

In fact, I quite like this type of novel, but I feel uncomfortable when I see that the protagonist sometimes has no brains, and his character is a bit ink. I always feel that it is almost meaningless. You said that you are stupid and can make elixirs. Why don't you practice and improve? You have to go to this secret realm. Most people go in to build foundations. You have to go there just to refine your Qi. When you see this, you want to complain. Secret realm for secret realm's sake. Either you fight to the end, or you kill decisively.

It's so well written, it would be best if the entire world of cultivators kills the protagonist. The protagonist has only reached the third level of Qi training, and there are foundation builders who want to kill him. There were two or three people ahead who kept trying to kill the protagonist, but I was convinced. There are several enemies here There are also those two senior sisters. The protagonist saved them and still insulted the protagonist.

I think it's quite interesting. I prefer the mortal flow, which unfolds slowly. Those who pretend to be Dalian and push them all the way are really boring after dozens of chapters.

It feels a bit intellectually depressing, and my writing skills in Chinese feel worse than those in high school.

Very nice

The writing style is childish, the description of the fighting scenes is poor, and there are too many manipulations to reduce intelligence. It is just a piece of writing.

When I saw Chapter 139, I just crushed the life and death talisman and ran out, and I saw his body again in the back. She and the other rescued person were clearly acquainted with Shen Jinghong. As a result, when I opened my mouth, a double brother appeared. Don't you even read the articles you write? Don't you even think about what you wrote? There are many more places. He killed a third-level monster without touching the body. He killed many people without touching their bodies. . . . I'm really speechless.

The rest of the forbearance has passed, and I have come to complain about two poisonous points: first, the third level of Qi training has spiritual thoughts, which is really ridiculous. Secondly, the mind can also see through clothes. During the Qi training stage, the mind can also scan the big boss in the Nascent Soul stage at will, and even see her completely! There is no privacy in this world. As long as you practice Qi or above, you can spy on whoever you want. That's nonsense.

After reading it, I think I can also write novels.