The Age of Great Industry in the Cultivation World

Two families in a town have more than one golden elixir stage, and the price of spirit stones is messy. How can I say that in a country whose highest combat power is only Nascent Soul, he can exchange a ton of black iron for a baby transformation pill? Still blocked by the Eastern countries, he wants to write about the combination of immortality and technology, but he just relies on modern times. Isn't spirit stone an energy source? , Wrote about petroleum again, couldn't the formation refining equipment produce power? The result was that it started to boil water again (steam engine). I was killed twice in my hometown and I didn't even remember it. I still recognized my adoptive father. Didn't you worship a master from a holy land? Then I remembered later When I came here, I wrote a senior brother, and I remembered that the first step to develop into the ocean was to practice a formation to boil the sea. What did I think? (He himself said that the first time the boat went to sea, countless ocean monsters attacked the shore and killed a few Nascent Souls, and then he did not dare to go into the sea)

There is not much actual content, there are too many messy plots, and cultivation is written as a tool, which is too weak. The golden elixir in the golden elixir stage self-cycles to generate mana, which is equivalent to nuclear fusion. This book is written like a weak chicken! There is also spiritual consciousness that can observe very far away and can also microscopically observe things that are invisible to the naked eye. In this book, it is just a word! The Nascent Soul stage is so drunk that it can be killed by these 20-kilometer-range cannonballs. People's spiritual consciousness has more than this range, let alone its own speed. Why do you think this cannonball doesn't even have a tracking function~ This book was originally thought to be written as a collision of two system cognitions to create a more splendid immortal cultivation technology. In the end, it just weakened and lowered the cultivation system to highlight the modern industrial system~ It can be seen that the author admires the Western industrial system very much. Even the birthplace of the protagonist is set in the same geographical location in Europe!

The author presents a different civilized world to everyone by coordinating cultivation, technology, legends, etc.

The subject matter is still very good, but can you, the author, don't always write plots where the protagonist thinks about it and then regrets it? It looked disgusting. It was a good watch at first, but I occasionally inserted a plot of this kind of intelligence reduction, which made me lose my mood to watch it.

The plot is relatively simple and accounts for 20% of the full text, and the remaining 80% is various explanations, introductions, narrations, data, and repetitions. The author's imagination is still not enough, there are too many characters, and the soy sauce characters are all described in various ways. The main characters are not deep enough, but the protagonist is still okay. I once read a book that depicted characters from different classes, but at a certain moment they were suddenly connected. That was sublimation.

The combination of traditional cultivation and modern science is not good, it feels very confusing. It should be much better to change the cultivation to a superpower.

Just write about World War II

Could it be that I can't continue writing? The ending is a bit sloppy.

The author has rich life experience, speaks meaningfully, and has his own outlook on life and values. There are thoughts about life.