When I First Joined Jiejiao, I Heard Jiejiao Qiyun Complaining.

The plot is pretty good, nothing too vicious, but there are a few things that aren't very good. First, the protagonist's realm has improved too quickly. From the early stage of Earth Immortal, to Heavenly Immortal, True Immortal, Mysterious Immortal, Golden Immortal, Taiyi Golden Immortal, and finally to Da Luo Jin Immortal, it only took about thirty chapters for the protagonist to reach the six major realms from scratch. Second, the author updates slowly. The third is the confusion of time, not to mention the passage of time that is not clearly explained. Taking Nezha as an example, it took nearly a hundred years from Nezha's birth to Nezha's fight in Shiji, and then another hundred years passed before Tongtian finished his lecture and accepted the protagonist as his disciple. More than a hundred years later, Tu was reborn as an authentic saint. At this time, more than two hundred years had passed since Nezha killed Shiji's disciples. Nezha was at least more than three hundred years old and had not yet begun to become a god. It is estimated that his mortal mother had died of old age and been reincarnated several times...

I thought this book was okay before, but the author suddenly added the movie Devil Boy Nezha. I just don't feel like this book is very good. There are also typos in the previous chapters and it feels like it was written by AI.

16 Hours of reading. The following only represents my personal opinion. The reading time of this book is not longer than mine. No refutation will be accepted. (๑˙ー˙๑) Most of the text in this book is devoted to fighting scenes, which is somewhat boring. Perhaps this part should be reduced in length. The other one is about Xiao Zi, Yao Ji, and Jiutian Xuannv. It can be seen from the article that they have a certain affection for the protagonist, but there is no obvious emotional line. Maybe they will start a harem in the future? But that is obviously inconsistent with the style of the book. I am thinking that I can either accept them all after the finale and then write two or three extras. It is not realistic in the main plot. There is also the evaluation of a certain book friend, about the Nezha Demon Boy movie, etc. I once thought that this was a troll invited by others. There was not much about Nezha in the article. At most, it only wrote one or two chapters. Generalizations are not credible. Compared with other prehistoric novels, the situation of swallowing the realm in this book is not too outrageous. There may be mistakes occasionally, but it does not matter. It is quite good. Emm, the last point is that I hope the author can update quickly, preferably so that he can work 16 hours a day. Summary: A decently enjoyable novel. The drawback is that there are too many fighting words, and the emotional line is difficult to write, so I'll leave it all for the side story.

Fairly good

That calamity chart. Correctly use rituals to give to Tongtian. Let Tongtian look for the Chaos Bell. Positive pressure interception teaches luck. There is a possibility that Jiejiao will not break up. With Tongtian's character, he will definitely give Pig's Feet good things. Even if you use pig's feet, you can get something good. A high-grade Lingbao can suck the pig's feet dry. Selfish stuff. My own Xingjun only thinks that it was all taught by Jie Jiao. I don't think it's good to teach at all.

It's a little bit toxic, but it's a good watch. Suddenly there's a girl who falls in love at first sight, and there's so much plot from the movie Nezha in the back.

Cool article, the kind that requires no thinking

It's more fun to watch

It's uncomfortable to watch 😣

The update is a bit slow. Can you update it faster?