Xianxia: Conquering Gods and Demons with Archery!

The plot is so childish. The main character is a junior high school student. He can ignore everything in a quarrel and prepare to kill people on the spot. If he gets angry, everyone should kneel down. Does your main character have the ability to break the rules now? Don't you care about your family's safety? Children who have not grown up have the same temperament

I'm a time traveler now, so I still feel mentally immature, but overall it's still okay, but it feels like a disconnect for old bookworms.

The low-end version of the world of cultivating immortals is a world of warriors cultivating immortals. The golden elixir and Yuanying are all running on the ground, and they all rely on blood and body to fight at close quarters...

You're so pretentious that if you can directly tell the reason, you have to wait until everyone is dead before you pretend.

The confused ending

The person who wrote it may actually be a high school student

There are too many typos, the data is too messy, and the writing style is a bit childish! When I read it, I had the same feeling: stumbling and far-fetched. Suitable for newcomers to check out.

The writing technique is still very immature and the routines are relatively old, so it can be read by newcomers.