Honghuang: I Guarded the Jie School for 100,000 Years!

The front is pretty good, but the back becomes chaotic after Liu Chen becomes a saint.

It sucks! ! ! The protagonist was not written at all later! ! !

A little comment, generally speaking, I am about to give up the book when I see Chapter 210. From the plot point of view, Chapter 210 is about the Lich and the early stage of Conferred God. There is nothing wrong with this. It highlights the protagonist and there is nothing wrong with it. This can be praised. However, the logic and data are very confusing. To what extent the protagonist's body injury has recovered in the early stage? You can forget this data is wrong. After all, you are copying and pasting. But how many times have you restored and how much progress have you restored? How can you, an author, get this wrong? Either don't write specific numbers, because readers can calculate them by themselves, or make them accurate, especially in the Fuxi section. After the protagonist obtained the luck merit, his injuries regressed and became more and more serious. Is this reasonable? No matter what the logic is, the author is probably forgetting what he wrote, or changing three or four authors? Yuan Yuan and Zhunti reluctantly discussed it, cheated the sect, turned around and forgot about it, Sanqing is a family, forget it, it can only show that the brotherhood of Sanqing is greater than anything else, okay, earlier, some of the protagonist's behavior was taken by Yuan Laozi, and they all wanted to rob people. As a result, the protagonist just helped the sect casually, but Yuan Laozi was jealous, and then he also wanted to suppress him. He even resorted to tricks to ask outsiders to help him. This is so logical, 🐷brain, there are many places in the article that are also very confusing, unless you really read it without any thinking, and then, in terms of writing, the first part is really okay, at least you can read it. Of course, readers who have high standards may not be able to read it. I can do it. But later on, what is this writing style and what is it written about? Let's put it that way. In the early stage, it should have been written by the author himself. Later, suddenly, it was the author's son who was writing it. It was very sudden. I was careless and did not abandon the book. So in general, from the middle stage onwards, The writing is not good, the logic is confusing, there are a lot of typos, the plot is okay, and there are only three grades for this score, and I can't give it the lowest, so I'll just give it a medium, average, if it's a ten-point scale, I'll give it a 7. If you don't agree with it, just hold it back to me, what is it about?

Very nice. I like this the most.

Who is the protagonist? I can't even understand it. Then I start coding later? Broken? Directly write Journey to the West?

After reading it, it gave me a low-end prehistoric feeling. What kind of reward would Daluo Jinxian have for hundreds of years of cultivation? ? ? What the hell, is there a Daluo Jinxian who is invincible under a saint? ? ? Isn't it possible that the author is writing a few novels without reading them?

It looked pretty good from the beginning, but I gave it three stars and found out that the plot in the middle was actually lost. Yes, it was lost. Maybe I forgot tens of thousands of words when I copied and pasted it.

Warning⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️Can't watch⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️Can't watch⚠️Can't watch, don't waste your time First of all, there is something wrong with the outline. I guess it's a newbie who doesn't know how to make an outline. The plot of Journey to the West is poorly written and doesn't even match up with the previous ones, let alone other things!

It's too bad. It started off but ended well. It seemed okay at the beginning, but then it got worse and worse. In the end, it was like Journey to the West, and the main character was gone.

The beginning is okay, but it falls apart in the middle. In the later stage, I directly become a god, copying Journey to the West, and definitely become a god, but the main character is gone.