Taiyi

Alas, the setting was quite interesting at first, but after reading more than seventy chapters, I couldn't stand it. The setting is interesting, but the writing style is a bit childish. I rarely write book reviews, usually paragraph reviews or chapter reviews. Let me briefly talk about the advantages and disadvantages of this book. The setting is very interesting and gives the protagonist a golden finger to slowly upgrade and mutate. The disadvantage is that it is too childish. Many times, the thinking is not like that of an adult at all. To be precise, he is a time-travelling person. This time-traveling is really what many people write about time-traveling but at all. There is no substitution at all, just a time-travel skin added. The protagonist is like a newborn teenage child. If he is really an adult, Zhao Muxue is just a teenage child, but your soul is that of a person in his thirties (at least). I was tempted, and finally when I saw the ending, Spider-Man was right. Liu Liu's death was all because of you. You insisted on building a dam and killed her, all because you didn't see your own weakness. You said it loud and clear, but at the critical moment, you still ran away on your own.

After Chapter 40, the emotional drama was a failure, and suddenly I didn't want to watch it anymore. It's not like this, buddy. I'm still watching it at Tavern Zhanqi Entertainment. Your emotional drama made me stupid.

The author has exhausted all his talents, and the one I feel is the best is Xian Ao! This book is really unreadable! Continuously opening cards accounts for half of it, and insisting on new settings for realm-leveling is the biggest failure! ! ! The characters are not clear-cut, and the writing within the sect is a mess! Also, the author writes about magical powers in too much detail, and it feels like he is filling the word count! The magical power of constantly counting family property! That magical power is pure nonsense.

It's like a dream novel. I don't know what it's about. It's like a game and there's no sense of immersion. It's just like listening to music in a normal novel. You can listen to love songs, dynamic songs, sad songs, etc., But the author writes it like you're listening to songs, opera, Taoist priests chanting sutras, monks reciting sutras. There's no sense of immersion at all. Moreover, the author likes to chew on words and write literary vocabulary as martial arts techniques.

When I saw a love scene, I immediately stopped watching it. A time-traveling man, who is dozens of years old in total, would be disgusting to have a pure love affair with a teenage girl. Moreover, the author's writing style is not good, it is neither smooth nor silky.

It's like giving all the benefits to others, it's like a fool

Low and low

Messy

The writing style is very average, the plot is abrupt, and the language is childish in some places. The rating is 8.5

I wrote this thing wherever I thought of it. There are piles of various cards, including intelligent creatures. You have to be addicted to card games to like this.