Fantasy: Wife, Empress, Cute Baby Causing Trouble in Kyushu

The initial settings are quite interesting, but unfortunately I am not good at story telling, and later on I fall into the common problem of cultivating immortals. I cannot level up in the early stage, but in the later stages, everyone can level up as many levels as they want, and the enemies keep jumping between levels like matryoshka dolls. The age settings for the two children are too young, which is extremely inconsistent. Why not set them around ten years old? You are all about cultivating immortals. It's not a problem for your husband and wife to be separated for ten years, right? The protagonist's dad is so useless, he is a complete passer-by. In the end, he was forced to jump to seven or eight realms, and the finale ended with two small characters fighting each other. There is no real character at all. That's it, five or six points

I've read about two hundred chapters, but I really can't stand it anymore. It's terrible. It's really terrible. It's so terrible that it's like reading an elementary school essay that's gone off topic. The plot is messy. Not only is the description unclear, but it also likes to be long and nonsense. It is pieced together. The previous text cannot be connected with the following text. The IQ has also plummeted. There are no words about naughty children. 80% Of the plot is written around two three-year-old children. The male protagonist is not even a supporting role. Above, the most outrageous thing is the cultivation level. In the beginning, it was difficult to create a martial god for decades. Gradually, it became a true god in three days and a god king in five days. It was like becoming an immortal is like playing house. You can play as you want. Moreover, as the cultivation level goes up, the IQ drops. Emotions are cultivated with the brain. The more I write, the more outrageous it becomes. The more I write, the more irrelevant I become.

The writing is good, but it took more than 300 chapters for the two siblings to recognize each other. I was expecting to recognize each other, but it never happened. I couldn't hold myself back and just looked through the table of contents and found out. Maybe it's because I can't read long novels.

It's really cold written

Well enough

Save money: Chapter 364, the empress learned that the two children were born to her, Chapter 459, the two children knew that the empress was their mother

This book is well written, easy to read, and not addictive. I'm halfway through, ready to finish.

I have read the novel for several years and this is my first time commenting on it. It's really terrible. You can write 10 chapters about a fight. It's really terrible.

Roasted from beginning to end, the same thing, no plot

Cool article, very good