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I don't know whether the author can see it or not, but I still have to put forward some opinions ٩( 'ω' )و . This book is very good. It makes people feel like they have grown up vicariously. The world view is well established and skill growth is clear. It is very unpretentious (｡ò ∀ ó｡), the content is comfortable to watch and makes people want to stop (๑>؂<๑); however, there is a subtle feeling in the later chapters, and the plot is a bit delayed. Regarding the lack of characteristics, if it is intentional, just pretend that I did not say it (ｰ̀εｰ́), if If you forgot to write it down before, you can add new settings appropriately, such as characteristic stones, etc.; (｢･ω･)｢In addition, it is hoped that Mewtwo's genetic egg can be modified to become stronger and increase its life span, and then add a mine map to dig for evolution stones | ू•ૅω•́), that perfect Mewtwo hole is a good foreshadowing (✪▽✪). PS: This article is not biased towards Naruto, you can read it

This is my first time reading a Pokémon novel I think this novel is really good, the story background is quite good Pokémon battles are exciting, and the descriptions are quite detailed. The whole novel makes people feel like they are growing up, and it doesn't look like a gold-fingered novel. Although the male protagonist is a bit useless, it gives me the feeling that anyone who knows Pokémon well can If you travel through time again and have a little protagonist halo, you can reach the height of the male protagonist. The disadvantage is that there are a lot of typos, and some mistakes appear in later chapters. Also, can you arrange a female protagonist? My favorite choices for the hostess: Mu Ningxia, Hua Zixu, Romiya. The first two should be passed. Finally, I hope the author writes more, it's really not enough. Of course, the author's health must also be protected

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The story background of your novel is good, but you haven't considered it at all. Some people have never watched Naruto and don't even know about it. So I can only say that it is very uncomfortable to watch. Most of the time, I don't know what you are talking about.

Why do I feel like this male protagonist is a bit useless?

Boring!

Very good, but there are too many typos (face covering)

I think Pigfoot is like a fool. As a time traveler, he has less common sense than an elementary school student. He trains elves to rely too much on their parents.

The writing is pretty good, but I think the content of this book is a game "Pet Kingdom Single Player Edition"

It looks good, but I was a bit speechless when I saw it in the middle.