Siheyuan: Giving Birth to Lou Xiao'e, Giving Birth to Two Babies in Three Years

Not very good, no beginning or end, and the writing is average.

There's nothing interesting about it, and it doesn't feel like a historical novel at all. Why do you have to wear the cloak of period writing? Writing urban writing is better than this. Period writing has its limitations. There is no such thing as urban writing. You can just write whatever you want. In the 1960s, there were bathrooms for men and women in the courtyard. You could take a bath every night. Isn't it novel? How to boil hot water? Does it use electricity? How to calculate the electricity bill? In those days, every household had a watch. What would a family with a small family do? Use coal? How are the fees calculated? It's okay to make things up randomly, there's a certain limit, there's no lower limit. The most important thing is that I have written this year's essay, but I still don't tell the truth.

Where is the next work?

The plot is confusing and the wording is imprecise.