No Crossing

If you want to see the green-haired turtle, hurry up and watch it. Those who like the three evil views are also welcome to watch it.

As a reader, please share your thoughts. It's understandable that most of the urban themes are about pretending to be pigs and eating tigers, but there is too much nonsense, and basically half of the slap-in-the-face plot is not on point. Moreover, the plot is a bit jumpy and the connection is not smooth. Since you want a divorce, it's better to get divorced as soon as possible. It's better to let her pursue you after the divorce is over than now. And who is the new heroine? Or a typical urban harem? And most of it revolves around Liu Huan. Is she the new heroine? Also, is this a pure city or a city-turned-immortality? The two waves of fights are not difficult to guess, and the writing is quite good, but there is a bit too much nonsense. (It's an immature idea, not a suggestion. If you don't like it, don't comment)

After reading more than 30 chapters, it's hard to finish in one sentence, and the plot is dragging. It can be seen that there is no general idea. I just think of what to write, which leads to too many nonsense plots. Just like the current short dramas, I just messed up the length and made up the number of words. It was obviously a very simple and enjoyable article, but it was written into a novel. Writing novels should also be in line with current events. There is no need to make a long story like in the past. A good novel has four to five hundred chapters, and one thousand is enough. It's over. I can tell by looking at the chapter titles that you're writing about a divorce. If it's a real divorce, it will start at least 200 chapters, and the emotional line is very lazy. It's not as good as a stallion novel. To write a novel, you must first know how to read novels and some books. Your writing is obviously procrastinating and it's difficult to read. It obviously has a good beginning. Seeing you like this, I want to write something different at first glance, but the plot is very bad.

This kind of subject matter is disgusting. The writing is quite 💩. If it is written by AI, I hope it will really happen to the author. If you are the author of your own writing, can you go to the national highway to cosplay on the speed bump? Or jump out suddenly and scare the truck?

Can't file for divorce? The ex-wife already sucks, and there's no new heroine, who wants to watch it?

The male protagonist pretends to be aloof. The male protagonist keeps saying that the female protagonist is cheating, but the female protagonist has not cheated. On the contrary, she has cheated on her in marriage. The divorce has not been successful yet, which is considered cheating in marriage. The stallion loves each one, takes revenge on his ex-wife, and cuckolds her. The heroine has been written as an indecisive one. She cares about the male protagonist but because of a child that is not her own, her first love is unclear. Moreover, it is not explained why the female protagonist chose the male protagonist to get married in the first place, and it is good. For example, there is a misunderstanding between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. The male protagonist's efforts are taken away by the second male protagonist, and the reason is not explained clearly. Even if it is once a month in five years, there will be no child. The female protagonist explains about the child, and the male protagonist does not hear it. It is torture, right? He pulls the female protagonist while starting a harem, which makes the female protagonist cheat and is not happy. The author does not forgive her and does not let her cheat. At the same time, he allows the male protagonist to cheat, and at the same time he condemns the female protagonist for cheating. I really believe it.

What kind of nonsense are you writing? Is there any logic at all? What's the difference between it and those mindless videos on Douyin? If you can explain something clearly in one or two sentences, you can write one or two chapters.

This book is really boring, the writing is very frustrating, and the plot is outrageous.

It's so bad you're not allowed to look at it

It's a stupid plot, don't watch it with your brain