Biding My Time in the Imperial Palace to Attain Immortality

In a sense, it can be considered the end after reading Chapter 55 (the writing behind it is too similar to AI). Then I watched Zhang Gui's character extras and felt that it was different from the article. The last sentence of redemption was very interesting. Zhang Gui. Xu Xiaohan. Ye Xuan. And Yu Zhong with a few strokes. What attracted me in the early stage was the feeling of close friends. After reading dozens of chapters, it became less interesting. The writing style needs to be improved. There are too many inconsistencies in the word order.

The plot can be conservatively said to be only up to Chapter 90. Especially the characters such as Zhang Gui, Xu Han, Prince Jie, Kong, Yu Le, Ye Xuan and even Zhong Huzi are all very well written, emotionally, and playing other characters. It can be said that it has the feeling of the Lord of Mysteries, but after the small world is released, many of the writings are It was very messy. I felt that the pace suddenly sped up, and the details began to be described in one stroke. I even made mistakes. The characters were written in the Riddler style. I didn't know what many of the characters were until my death. For example, how did the Confucian Sword Immortal and Zhuo become good friends? I could have written about Sora and Zhuo and then moved on to the protagonist. To be honest, if the author is willing to take his time, this book will definitely become a hit. The writing is so messy now that I wonder if the gunman wrote it in the front and Ai in the back.

It was okay in the beginning, but not so good from the beginning of the war between the two countries. The scene was too big and the writing was not good and I couldn't control it. An emperor is killed three times repeatedly, and the plots are almost the same. Too watery.

The front is really beautiful, but when you look at the back, it feels like it was written by a gunman, and it's very fragmented.

This book actually ends with the destruction of Daliang, and they can be buried together. It has an artistic conception of leaving blank space. After reading a little bit later, the combat power began to collapse, the plot also deteriorated, and it was a bit of a continuation of the story.

After chapter 60, it's basically impossible to read. There's no logic. I don't know what the author wants to express.

After reading Chapter 129, I haven't read the rest. The realm is very confusing. The two levels of Qi Lianxian and Ji Jingjing are confusing. The protagonist is the strongest without brains. The upgrade conditions are also very strange. The more I read, the weirder it becomes. When I went to the East and West Factory, I felt that the author could continue writing. I couldn't continue the idea, so I just went on. There were few comments. The idea at the beginning was very novel, but I couldn't read it anymore.

Halfway through, there are as many masters as dogs, and immortals are everywhere

The logic of the first 60 pictures is clear and the plot is reasonable, but the later ones are confusing, the realm is confusing, the logic is messed up, the plot is messy, and the characters are messy, just like a split personality.

What is the logic of this book? The protagonist wants to stay in the library and shows off everywhere, causing trouble. Where is the time traveler's brain? Why is this rating so high?