Online Game: Emperor of the Underworld

Although the ending is rushed, it explains the ending of the story very clearly, which shows that the author likes his work very much. It must have been a hasty ending due to various reasons. But the overall world view from the beginning, the interweaving of the plot, and the structure of the game, system, and NPC are all very good. A good novel!

Honest comments and suggestions For online articles, the pace is too fast and makes people feel like they are reading too fast. In terms of details, the character creation is not good✋ Overall, it's hard to describe

Your book makes the main character seem to have some IQ issues.

He was so cool that he went from level 85 to level 120 in a daze. The national war was over before it even started. Seriously rotten, rotten, rotten, rotten, rotten, rotten, rotten, rotten, rotten, rotten

At the beginning, it was said that pig's feet are dark attributes, which are opposite to light, and then they went to the light camp. What a mess. Moreover, most of the hidden professions are dark-type. It's really funny.

Nice

I couldn't stand it anymore after seeing the dog food being thrown around. I forced the plot, and the BOSS guards could hardly beat it. They were so exhausted that they didn't even have the brains to fight the BOSS. Then the two of them sprinkled the dog food somewhere, and it was as if they were about to die. I forced the BOSS story to be activated, and I was convinced. Goodbye to you.

It's a mess, and the protagonist has no skills but can't use them! It looks terrible!

It's well written. Don't write it again in the future. There's no need for it.

Unfinished