LOL: This Player Played Drunkenly and the Whole Internet Laughed Like Crazy

It's so refreshing, so exciting. How can I put it this way? I've read more than a dozen other alliance novels. Not to mention anything else, I felt aggrieved and dumbfounded. Only Su Bai was happy from beginning to end. But let me give you some opinions to make up for the shortcomings of this book. 1. Edg's coach is too smart, he has no IQ at all. For example, in the LPL championship game, Nofe actually wanted to let the opponent kill Su Bai. No, is this really stupid? Not winning the championship is just for the sake of peace of mind? Is this the coach's measure? 2. In fact, it can be a little more exciting, such as more details, otherwise Riven Lightspeed eq1.51S! Originally, I thought I could write it down to one or two hundred words, but you got through it in a few words. It didn't have that shocking feeling. I even felt that the protagonist was not pretending to be successful. 3. Arrange more plots, such as giving the male protagonist a girlfriend, or write other plots such as traveling. To be honest, it's a bit boring to watch the game every day. Besides, the one you wrote about going to the comic exhibition, I thought you would write about some girls wearing white stockings, but nothing happened. You even got yourself drunk. To be honest, this is really unnecessary. This drunken fist is really too poisonous. I couldn't stand it three times, and then I came back to watch it after a few days. That's pretty much it. I hope the author will get better and better in the future, come on!

How should I put it, I personally think this book is average. Let's talk about the good points first. If you look at it from the perspective of fun, it is indeed quite cool. The worst part is, first of all, there are a lot of typos, and not only do they have the same pronunciation but different words, some of the pronunciations don't match up, which makes it more uncomfortable when reading. Secondly, the characterization can be said to make everyone as a whole mentally retarded. The coaching staff is of no use at all, and the teammates have nothing to do with it. It's all up to the protagonist to find opportunities, and the opponents are all disabled. Professional players don't know how to look at the opponent's summoner skills and talents. Novices who have played for a few days still know how to take a look. Who would be a professional player who always feels that the opponent relies on luck to win? Genting doesn't all rely on luck. In addition, people like letme, nofe, and faker feel that they are forcibly distorted. There is also brother nofe who is a coach. How can he hope that his teammates will be dealt with and hope to lose? How can any coach not want to win? This situation will not happen at any level. There are also things like commentating that I no longer know how to do. If the colonel forces a confrontation in a competition or even a competition between Chinese and Korean teams, he won't do that even if he is paid. In addition, I personally feel that the emotional writing is relatively poor. Firstly, it is a bit uncomfortable to say that the love object is Zhou Shuyi (this can be said that I don't know what she did, it is not a big problem), and then when it comes to the emotional line, it is incomprehensible to say the least. Then you add a drunken boxing performance and it becomes a bit messy. If you have anything to do, just perform at the competition venue and then go to the comic expo to do it. The most important thing is that you, the author, write about the alliance, not anything else. The alliance is not a one-person game, and 5v5 has directly become 1v9. In the end, you actually ended up unfinishing this novel. The task you were asked to write was "Triple Crown", so why did you end it all at once? It's okay to write it, but you still haven't finished it because it's just too messy. Also, I would like to mention that the above remarks are purely personal opinions.

First of all, I don't know much about writing books, and I don't know if this is the first time the author has written a book. Based on my nine years of experience in reading novels, I feel that the writing is too exciting and lacks a sense of reality. I could write more about the emotions or behaviors of the people around me. Gakunan, Rennan and iboy, as the saying goes, alliance is never a one-man game. There is also another book I read before called "I Am Not an Expert in the Alliance". The emotional lines he wrote are very good and his understanding of the game is deeper than what you wrote. It just feels weird. To put it simply, I need to read more books written by big guys. There is too little written about feelings.

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It's a pity that Zhou Shuyi's tower defense

I couldn't stand seeing Sister Zhou anymore. . . .

The author and pg1 share Zhou Shuyi, which is unacceptable! !

I can't even write a cool article, so I won't mention the typos. The heroes in the lineup are inconsistent. The dragon on the wave seduced the opponent but they didn't come. This wave of the opponent didn't dodge because of the dragon group on the wave? It's really poisonous!

It looks very cool, but as some comments said, the players on the same team are too bad, but I still like to read it. I checked it today and the update progress is still very fast. I will try my best to stick to it. Come on, author.

The e-sports novel is written as a intrigue novel, why don't you write about the harem?