The Myriad Gods Cauldron

The plot is exciting. Although the opening routine is a bit cliché, the author's writing is very good. The plot is compact and not procrastinating. The protagonist's strength improves quickly but is not brainless. Each supporting character has a distinct IQ and personality. Looking forward to what the author will do next. And the speed is also very fast!

Overall, it is a good novel. I would rate it 8.2 Out of 10. I hope the author can stick to it. Don't be toxic, if you can continue to write step by step. If you write a thousand or two thousand copies, the novel will basically become popular. In fact, every novel is like this. People who can write novels have a certain imagination and have their own style in plot. All that's left is persistence and a little bit of patience. Every novel, if written like this, will be a good work. Not only do readers hope for a good work, but they also hope that the author will be responsible for his own work and the characters he creates.

1. There are a lot of typos in the whole text. If you don't know the meaning of the words, you use them indiscriminately. Your cultural level is not good. 2. The realm of a certain person I just wrote above was changed and overturned in the following paragraphs, and the realm has changed, which is very confusing. 3. Combat strength collapsed: Many golden elixirs and a late Nascent Soul went to beat up an evil cultivator at the peak of the golden elixir, and they fought for a long time. Can you believe it? Moreover, during the pig's trotter Qi refining stage, there are foundation building, elixir formation, and golden elixir above, but he actually crossed the three realms to fight against the latter stage of the golden elixir. He couldn't understand it, and his combat power was too low. 4. In the world of immortality, is it appropriate to put together a bunch of antique calligraphy and painting, equity and other modern words? Are these prevalent there? This is not urban literature. 5. All the women he meets have sex with him. Thoroughbreds are just for studs. You can write a harem, but purebreds really can't stand it.

Stallion article!

Wonderful writing, beautiful!

It was written that the crisis was getting bigger and bigger in the future, so he jumped out of the system, forcibly making the protagonist stronger, and kept laying out foreshadowing, and kept talking about this mysterious and yellow world thing, but did not explain it clearly. They were all Riddlers, and their combat power collapsed later on, and they were all overkill. And the protagonists all meet one after another. Ke Ling, the Tiandao of the Xuanhuang Realm, can only inflict heavy damage to a Demon Saint level person once, and Daluo Jin Fairyland can come to the Xuanhuang Realm, so why doesn't the Immortal King come to find it himself? Moreover, most of the people the protagonist meets are women, few are men, and the protagonist is also like a succubus. And Xia Zixuan will have no plot at all later on. Where is her Holy Body of Creation? I can't stand it after reading more than 800 chapters.

The taste of the world

Talents that can only be written by gods

The more I write, the worse it gets, so quit now.

Read Chapter 93, discarded, cleared bookshelf