I Became the Ancestor of My Clan

After reading the first half, I found it quite interesting. Although it is a fun novel, it would be better if it was more funny. After all, fighting and killing will get tiring, so why not be more cheerful and follow the path of sand sculpture, and then comment after reading the second half...

After reading about ten chapters, I gave up and couldn't stand it anymore. He is over a hundred years old, and he has transformed back into a young man in his 20s. After entering the academy, he still looks like a little kid. It's so childish! Can you pretend to be older? I always feel that there is a causal relationship with women. It's a bit disgusting and I'm tired of watching it!

I'm very good at making jokes. It does have this meaning at the beginning. The transition to college is a bit pale, but it's not a stallion and the story is great!

You can only read more than 40 chapters of this book, so I advise you not to read it in the future. It is completely divorced from the plot of family development. As the ancestor of the family, he actually joined the academy with his descendants. It is written in a mess.

Awesome, your system is a waste, it's useless, you can't do anything, you can't eat anything, and there's nothing left in the system. It's not even as good as the lower planes, so what else are you doing? There is a toxin invasion that cannot be eliminated or discovered. If you ask me what the monster is, I don't know. What else can your system do?

It's pretty good. I finished reading it in five hours. Can you guys take a look at Cultivation to Immortality?

Hmm... The beginning looks okay. Compared with other ancestral stories, it's not that serious. Maybe this is another funny style.

Unfinished unfinished

In the first half, there was that passionate feeling of protecting your family, but later on, even the original intention of the protagonist was gone.

A bunch of typos. What was written after Chapter 40?