A New Immortal Is Born

The ending was too sudden... It just ended for the sake of ending. There is still a lot of plot left unexplained. Is there any intention of a second part?

Author, if you don't continue to update, I will follow the network cable to find you! ! !

When the author writes the second volume, I feel so heartbroken that I almost forget that this is the first time I have read this novel.

The rhythm is relaxed and happy. Although it is a cheating life, it is very happy. I hope there will be a sequel and bring the Zongzong artifact with me, hahahahahaha

What a hasty ending! The heroine is cute, self-reliant, perseverant, and works hard enough to gradually become a powerful and awesome being with extraordinary abilities. The male protagonist has very few scenes, which is something I don't like to see. I feel that such a male protagonist is really not worthy of the female protagonist. He is too weak. He is a high-scoring, low-energy character with no abilities. It feels like the little affection between the male and female protagonists from childhood maintains a shallow and illusory love. The male protagonist is in love, but he knows that he has reached a higher level, so he can only hold on to the feeling of his youth and stick to the female protagonist. The heroine gave me the feeling that she was too young and too careless about feelings. I didn't realize that it was actually a thought in my youth. This is the feeling that the emotional lines of the male and female protagonists throughout the novel gave me. In addition, the good guys die because they talk too much, and luckily the bad guys' attacks are all in slow motion. Ha ha ha ha!

I actually forgot to give a good review again? !

😳Is it over? It's too sudden. I also want to know about the relationship between Yue Ling and Chi Mo, and the parents of the second senior brother. Why don't you just fill in so many holes?

To be honest, I can't appreciate it 1. No intermarriage with foreign races. Settings such as pure bloodline are simply anti-human. Isn't it common sense that close relatives cannot intermarry? 2. The article has always emphasized that the heroine has always maintained the height of a 5-year-old girl. She is actually only 7 years old. However, there have been many scenes where she has a very good figure and is attracted by adult men. Even the hero has the idea of ​​pushing her down. There are also many descriptions of the heroine wanting to knock him down. In the end, although the heroine's age is not stated, it is repeatedly emphasized that the appearance is still eleven or twelve years old, so they arrange to get married? ! ! 3. The quarrels and quarrels between the heroine and her pets are really childish. The world of cultivators sells modern jokes in large sections, which is not funny at all, and is even embarrassing.

Growing up, surrounded by friends! Really good

Very interesting, I hope the author will make another one