Reborn with Supplies: I Become Humanity’s Strongest in the Apocalypse

"A Collection of Typos" has incoherent context, unclear sentences, many incorrect sentences, and many things that are incomprehensible. The plot is corny and boring, and the male protagonist is so charming that every woman will fall in love with him. If you take the advice, withdraw immediately.

After reading it, it is definitely a work above the passing level. The reason why I persisted in reading this long novel is that people in this apocalyptic world are very humane and moral. Although there are scum and the best, there are also very lively people who are not indifferent. Moreover, there are social order and base legal constraints. It is rare to see a scene where someone is killed just because they don't like it. Even when punishing enemies, it is basically to find evidence and finally let the base imprison them. And compared to other tense apocalyptic novels, this book has more room to breathe. The heroine has teammates she can trust and a family who loves her, so she can sleep peacefully. This feeling is very warm. In the early stages of the plot, the heroine did something that 99% of the protagonists in apocalyptic stories I have seen did not do. She encouraged the people in their building to unite to kill the zombies, gave them food, and also changed the fate of the people in this building so that they could protect themselves in the early days of the apocalypse. What's amazing is that my favorite person in the Black Hawks team is the background character Lu Gaoge. He is a very taciturn and rarely described person, but I have a liking for him inexplicably. I also like Yu Qian, the lively and lovely younger brother, but I object to the blank space the author left for his feelings at the end, which seems to be a bluff (my sister rejected it for you in my heart). There are also Zhou Ting, the military advisor and housekeeper, and Shen Xingyuan, the healing nanny. U1S1 has a lot of roles for them, and they serve as comedians. However, Zhou Ting is so old and the plot does not give him a single role in the end (bushi). There is another character who is rarely described, the little white-haired brother Mu You, who looks very handsome when you imagine him. There are also some shortcomings, but they are bearable. There are many confusing characters and typos in their names. Fortunately, I basically know who I am talking about based on the context. In the middle and later stages of the character's design, the male protagonist is too in love with a brainiac, which is very inconsistent with the charm and is incompatible with other lively people. Either because he is handsome outside and a group of girls fall in love with him and he will not marry the female protagonist to provoke his love rival, or he is jealous that someone likes the female protagonist (dbq has too many plots that repeat one after another and focus on describing four of these female partners with serious brain diseases. Is this really normal?), Maybe this is a good way to express the relationship between the male and female protagonists? There are still some holes that have not been filled, such as the ending of the two members of the Minghui Brilliance Team. How did the girl (I forgot her name) know that the heroine has space?

It's okay, but the name is a bit confusing and there are many typos

The most important thing is that you have too many typos.

The plot is okay, but there are too many typos and the names are confusing. It's okay to read without thinking.

First of all, I have to admit that the subject matter is quite new. It is the first time I see that it can be absorbed directly without using the corresponding crystal core attributes. But there are so many typos on every page, plus the name confusion, just the name An Ning, how come there is such a high error rate. Also, it's really frustrating to watch the heroine when she's being controlled by others. The necklace space is not clearly explained either. Ah, there are so many things I want to complain about.

This is the worst book I have ever read. It's not about the plot, but I feel like the author didn't write it carefully at all. He was in a hurry, the characters were confusing, and the punctuation was missing for a while. Alas,,,

There are a lot of typos, and names are often spelled incorrectly. There are errors in every chapter, making it very confusing.

The plot is average, nothing particularly novel, and I don't know what the heroine's stockpile is for. Anyway, I've seen more than 100 of them now, so I haven't taken them out yet. I didn't tell anyone, and then I made typos. Many of the characters' names are always wrong. It's an old-fashioned novel with the male protagonist. The male protagonist is a heartthrob, the female protagonist solves the suitors, it's a dull, long and messy story

The content is okay, but there are too many typos in every chapter. Can the author check it before submitting? Looking at it, there are all typos.