One Drop of Spirit Liquid, One Breakthrough: I Am Immortal!

The plot becomes more exciting as it goes on, not bad, not bad

1. The whole book was very well written up to Chapter 164 when I evaluated it. It can be seen that the author has a serious intention to write a web article. Let me give you a personal review to help readers who haven't read it. 2. So far, I think the biggest shortcoming is that the protagonist is a time traveler. As a modern person, it is 99.99% Impossible to take risks with a golden finger - a treasure gourd. The protagonist of this book is particularly adventurous and takes the path of "fighting", but it is almost impossible for modern people to have the endurance to endure the flesh and blood in the early stage. I personally feel that it would be better to make up for this if a local aboriginal encounters an adventure and starts the game. The entire article does not reflect any of the benefits of the protagonist as a time traveler and the modern thinking mode. 3. The writing style of the article is very good. It can be seen that the author looked up words when writing and has a certain literary background. It is not all in vernacular. The writing style is very delicate. I don't know if the author is a girl or a warm boy. The foreshadowing is very good, and the plot has ups and downs. 4. The rhythm is slow. This is not a shortcoming, but it is difficult to write a complete book. For this kind of rhythm, you can refer to "The Strongest Qi Training Period in History" and "The First God of Eternity". Nearly 160 chapters were written during the Qi training period alone. As the training time gets longer and longer, foundation building will even take 300 chapters. The entire book will be estimated to be five to six thousand chapters long, which is easy to end. 5. It is not a cool novel. The protagonist cannot be invincible. She is competitive, cautious, righteous, and decisive. She also has a kind and innocent heart. For the time being, there is no obvious behavior of the lower body controlling the brain. The heroine is not sure whether she is a genius girl at the beginning. Each character is very good, has his own personality, and is well portrayed, but I personally feel that the description of some of the expressions is not accurate enough, and the praise and criticism are not correct. 6. The sword came unexpectedly. I didn't expect the death of many supporting characters. The well-developed characters suddenly disappeared. The author is very perseverant. Please don't spoil the story. There is a character named Mo. From the subtle foreshadowing description at the beginning, I slightly guessed that he was a villain. However, in the subsequent description, I gradually believed in him from a God's perspective like the characters in the book. Then suddenly it turned around and he turned out to be a villain. To my surprise, it is rare for immortality novels to have such a plot. 7. I am looking forward to the following plot, but there are too few chapters. I can only keep the book for a few years. If I don't speed up the pace and quickly upgrade it without ending, I feel that it will take another 8 years to start writing.

It started calmly. I've read more than 20 chapters. Gradually it started to feel a bit satisfying.

A very ok novel, five-star praise.

There is potential but no stamina, and the great revenge is over without being avenged! All talents are exhausted!

What kind of novel is this that ends in a hurry without avenging revenge? It has a beginning and no end, it's so outrageous